初中初一作文450字:My Favorite Season
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作文标题: My Favorite Season
关 键 词: 初中初一 450字
字 数: 450字作文
本文适合: 初中初一
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本作文是关于初中初一450字的作文,题目为:《My Favorite Season》,欢迎大家踊跃投稿。 There are four seasons in a year.They are spring,summer,fall and winter.Spring is green.Summer is red.Fall is golden and winter is white.What''s my favorite season,do you know?Guess!Yes!You are right!My favorite season is summer.Because is hot in summer.I can go swimming in the swimming pool.I often go swimming with my friends.We have a good time in the swimming pool.I also buy some ice-cream.I like ice-cream very much.It''s tasty and sweet.At home,if I feel hot,I will turn on the air-conditioner.It''s cool!You will feel confortable at once!I like summer best.Do you like summer?名师点评:小作者这篇文章介绍的是四季,小作者概括了四季的特点,并且介绍了自己最喜欢的季节——夏季。小作者告诉读者自己之所以喜欢夏季,是因为夏季可以和朋友一起游泳,可以吃冰激凌,天热的话可以开空调。文章的条理性很好,作为一篇英语作文,本文语言流畅,语法正确,叙述也很生动。小作者还以猜谜的形式告诉读者自己最喜欢夏季,这样文章就显得更生动了。这篇文章写得很好,小作者的语言表达能力很强,很有语言天赋。希望小作者继续努力,以后可以成为著名的翻译家。(学乐中国特聘教师:王运连老师)2010-6-8 21:55:00
关 键 词: 初中初一 450字
字 数: 450字作文
本文适合: 初中初一
作文来源: https://zw.liuxue86.com
本作文是关于初中初一450字的作文,题目为:《My Favorite Season》,欢迎大家踊跃投稿。 There are four seasons in a year.They are spring,summer,fall and winter.Spring is green.Summer is red.Fall is golden and winter is white.What''s my favorite season,do you know?Guess!Yes!You are right!My favorite season is summer.Because is hot in summer.I can go swimming in the swimming pool.I often go swimming with my friends.We have a good time in the swimming pool.I also buy some ice-cream.I like ice-cream very much.It''s tasty and sweet.At home,if I feel hot,I will turn on the air-conditioner.It''s cool!You will feel confortable at once!I like summer best.Do you like summer?名师点评:小作者这篇文章介绍的是四季,小作者概括了四季的特点,并且介绍了自己最喜欢的季节——夏季。小作者告诉读者自己之所以喜欢夏季,是因为夏季可以和朋友一起游泳,可以吃冰激凌,天热的话可以开空调。文章的条理性很好,作为一篇英语作文,本文语言流畅,语法正确,叙述也很生动。小作者还以猜谜的形式告诉读者自己最喜欢夏季,这样文章就显得更生动了。这篇文章写得很好,小作者的语言表达能力很强,很有语言天赋。希望小作者继续努力,以后可以成为著名的翻译家。(学乐中国特聘教师:王运连老师)2010-6-8 21:55:00
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