Question

请哪位英语专业的朋友帮忙写一份英文简历，千万不要那种在线翻译出来的，要求职用的，不胜感激。

年龄25岁，女性，有三年的时尚服装销售经验，并且非常热爱服装销售行业和顾客服务行业，能吃苦耐劳，能接受任何高强度工作，沟通能力好，英语能力强，对工作和生活充满热情，有很强的责任感，具备一定的创新意识。

Answer 1

25 years of age, female, has three years of sales experience in fashion clothings. Also very much love about the fashion retail industry and customers service industry. Hard working, can take on any higher degree of works, with good communication skill, speaking good English, passionate about both work and life, very responsible,and with a certain level of creative mind.

绝对是人手翻译，希望你会满意，并祝求职成功!

追问

简历就是这么写吗，不用句子？我只是说大概内容，并不是要这么照着翻译，哎呀，我也不懂了，先谢谢你。

追答

你说得对，我真糊涂，让我替你改一改罢，待会有空即替你重写好吗?

追问

那先谢谢你了，那请你帮忙按照你的经验结合这些帮我写一份，帮我润润色修改逻辑顺序啊什么的，因为我不知道要怎么写，所以提问的时候也说不太清楚，嘿嘿，我不擅长英语，十分感谢你。

追答

很对不起，因为有家人来探我，所以到现在才有空替你写，已写好了，是一封正式求职信，若果还有甚麼要求，只管继续问罢，我有空一定会替你回答的。再祝你求职成功!!

To whom who may concern,或 Dear sirs or madam,

My name is XXXX. I am 25 years of age, female. I have 3 year of retail experience in fashion clothing. Also I love the fashion retail industry and customer service industry very much. I am hard working, can take on any higher degree of work. I have good communication skill, can speak very good English. I am passionate about my work and life, very responsible and with a certain level of creative mind. I would very much like to work for your company, and hope that you can offer me a position. With my good attitude and enthusiasm towards work, which I am sure, I will not disappoint you and your company. Thank you very much for listening and your time. Look forward to hearing from you soon.
With very best wishes!

Yours sincerely,

XXXX

Answer 2

简历是简历，求职信是求职信，岂可混为一谈？再说现在有几个企业招聘还有时间看你长篇大论的求职信？HR花在每位初试者简历上的平均时间只有10秒左右。

追问

也谢谢你告诉我这些，谢谢了。

追答

这个世界真是，有些人不清楚状况就瞎教别人，我明白为什么现在网络世界那么多垃圾信息。这样的答案还被选为最佳，它解决你的问题了吗？我真不知该说什么好

追问

好吧好吧，勿怒勿怒，其实我是帮别人问的，她是要这种的表达的，怪我没有说清楚，再说我问了人家好多。也很感谢你告诉我这些，谢谢了，嘿嘿。