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2012高考英语短文改错题及答案

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Answer 1

高考英语试题分类汇编——改错
1.（10四川）
An English lady was finally decided that she really should 66_______
learn to drive, And after many attempts, she past her 67_______
driving test and told her husband that，to release， he 68_______
was going to drive him over to France for a holiday， But 69_______
then a week after the trip, she suddenly announced that 70_______
they wouldn’t take the holiday. “How did you change your 71_______
mind?” he asked her by surprise. “Well，it is all because 72_______
of the business of driving on right.” She said, “I have 73______
been practicing for three weeks now， but I still couldn’t 74______
get used to it-in fact, I’ve nearly killed three peoples。” 75______
66. 答案：去掉finally 前的was 解析：lady与decide 之间为主动关系
67. 答案：past→passed 解析：此处意为“通过”，应使用pass的过去式
68. 答案：he→she 解析：此处应为妻子要带丈夫去法国，应用女性的人称代词
69. √
70. 答案：after→before 解析：此处应为在此次旅行之间，妻子就因不适应右侧驾驶改变了主意
71答案：How→Why 解析：此处为丈夫对妻子突然改变主意不理解，而询问原因
72. 答案：by→in 解析：in surprise 为固定搭配，意为“惊奇地，惊讶地”
73. 答案：right→the right 解析：方位名词前腰加定冠词
74. 答案：couldn’t→can’t 解析：此处应为目前还不是要右侧驾驶，应用现在时。
75. 答案：peoples→people 解析：不可数名词

2.（10全国Ⅰ）
It was a chance of a lifetime to win the first 76_______
prize on the Story Writing Show. All I had to do 77_______
was to write a story or present it. My teachers 78_______
have been telling me how great my writing was. 79_______
So if they had said was true, I would have a chance 80_______
of winning the prize . What were better , I had useful 81._______
help . There was Uncle Chen , gentleman living 82._______
near my house , who was a very much famous writer 83._______
He agreed to reading my story and give me some 84._______
advices on how to write like a real writer 85._______
76. 正确。
77. on改为in, in…show “在…节目里”。
78. or改为and，or表选择，and表顺接和并列。
79. have改为had，上下文时态要一致。
80. if后加what，what引导主语从句，在句中意思为“…的话”
81. were 改为was，不可数名词谓语动词用单数。
82. gentleman前加a，gentleman是可数名词。
83. much去掉，“非常出名”，very修饰形容词，very much修饰动词。
84. reading改为read，agree to do sth.“同意做某事”。
85. advices改为advice，advice是不可数名词。

3.（陕西）

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线（ ），并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
My sister saw a lovely cup when we are shopping the other day. She liked it at once. Then
she bent down and picked ^ up to look at a price on it. As she did this, lots of tea splashed on his
T-shirt! I had to try hardly not to laugh at her shocked face! My sister wanted ^ get out of the shop
as fast as she could when a shop assistant came over to us. It w\as turned out to be her own cup,
that she’d left on the shelf by mistake. The assistant was clearly as embarrassing as my sister,
for I just thought it was funny!
My sister saw a lovely cup when we are shopping the other day. She liked it at once. Then
were
she bent down and picked ^ up to look at a price on it. As she did this, lots of tea splashed on his
it the her
T-shirt! I had to try hardly not to laugh at her shocked face! My sister wanted ^ get out of the shop
Hard to
as fast as she could when a shop assistant came over to us. It was turned out to be her own cup,
that she’d left on the shelf by mistake. The assistant was clearly as embarrassing as my sister,
which embarrassed
for I just thought it was funny!
But/yet/while/and

4.（10全国Ⅱ）

Christie was one of my best friend at high school 76._______
At that time, we often spend time together. 77._______
Thank to her help, I made great progress in my 78._______
study. Last year, she decided to study abroad. In 79._______
other words, we would be separated for long time. 80._______
Before her leaving off, I prepared a gift to show 81._______
my best whishes to him. She said it was the best 82._______
gift she has ever had. From then on, we’ve 83._______
kept touch with another through e-mails. I 84._______
look forward to see her again in the near future. 85._______
答案：
76. friend → friends. one of 后接名词复数
77. spend →spent. At that time表示过去发生的事情
78. Thank →Thanks. Thanks to 是固定短语，“多亏了，因为”
79. √
80. for a long. For a long time表示“一段时间”，固定短语
81. 去掉off. leave 已经表示离开之意，off多余
82. him →her. 代词使用要一致。
83. has →had.时态错误，应为过去完成时。
84. kept ∧in touch 固定短语keep in touch with表示“与人保持联系”
85. see →seeing. look forward to中的to是介词，后接动词时要用动名词形式。

5.（10辽宁）
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10初语言错误，每句中最多有两处。对标有题号的每一行作出判断：如无错误，在该行右边横线上画一个勾（√）如有错误（每行只有一个错误），则按下列情况改正：
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符合(^)，在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。
修改：在错的词下划—横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.至允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Christine was just a girl in one of my class. I never knew much about
her except for that she was strange. she didn’t talk many .her hair was black
and purple, and she worn black sports shoes and a black sweater ,although in the
summer .she was ,in fact, rather attractively, and she never seemed ^care what
the rest if us thought about her like the rest of my classmate ,I didn’t really
together that I begin to understand why Christine dressed the way she did .
Christine was just a girl in one of my class. I never knew much about
her except for that she was strange. she didn’t talk many .her hair was black
去掉for 解析：except that中不能再用for。
many→much 解析：修饰动词talk应该用much，此处是副词，many没有此用法。
and purple, and she worn black sports shoes and a black sweater ,although in the
worn→wore解析：谓语动词用过去式，不能用过去分词
although→even 解析：although是连词，不能修饰介词短语，even可以
summer .she was ,in fact, rather attractively, and she never seemed ^care what
attractively→attractive解析：做表语，用形容词 seemed →seemed to 解析：seem后用带to的不定式
the rest if us thought about her like the rest of my classmate ,I didn’t really
classmate→classmates 解析：名词需用复数
want to get closest to her . it was only when we did their chemistry project
closest→close 解析get是连系动词，后跟形容词 their→our解析：人称和前面一致
together that I begin to understand why Christine dressed the way she did .
begin→begin 解析：时态前后不一致

6.（10重庆）
Here is my idea about how a friend is like. Firstly, 76.._______
a friend is someone you can share your secrets. If you 77.._______
tell him a secret, never will he talks about it with anybody 78.._______
else. Besides, a friend is always good listener when you 79.._______
need one. After hear your sad stories, he will say some 80.._______
words that is nice and warm. Still, your happiness makes 81.._______
him happily too. What’s more, a good friend is willing to 82.._______
offer the help to which you need, or can at least give you 83.._______
some advices. In a word, friends are those you like and 84.._______
trust, and you will enjoy every minute that you spent with 85.._______
them.
解析：
76. how what,由what引导宾语从句，从句中like缺宾语。
77. 在secret之后加with，share sth. with sb.
78. talks talk，will后须加动词原形。
79. 在always之后加a，listener是可数名词，且是泛指。
80. hear hearing，after是介词，后接名词或动词-ing形式。
81. is are，that代指先行词words，所以谓语动词要用复数。
82. happily happy，形容词作宾语补足语。
83. 去掉to，which you need作定语，意为：提供你所需的帮助。
84. advices advice，advice是不可数名词。
85. spent spend，前后时态须一致。

7.（10浙江）
After shopping, Mother and I went to a restaurant for lunch. I notice Mother looking at a
nearby table occupy by an elderly woman and young couple. They are silently, and it was clearly
that things were not going well. As we left, Mother stopped on their table. “Excuse me,” she said,
put her arm around the unhappy old woman. “You remind me so many of my mother. May I hug ”
(拥抱) you?” The woman smiled happily as she accepted to it. After we left, I said, “That was
very nice of you, Mother. So I didn’t think she looked like Grandma.” “Neither did me.” said
Mother cheerfully. k*s5u
1. notice 改为noticed 解析：本文的时间都是一般过去时态。
2. occupy改为occupied
解析：此处是分词短语作后置定语，occupy 与table是被动关系，故应用过去分词。
3. young之前加上a。考点：解析：从下文可知是一对夫妇，所以需加冠词。
4.clearly改为clear。考点：解析：此处是作表语，用形容词形式。
5. on改为by或at。考点：解析：被桌子挡住了，应用by或at。
6．Put改为putting。考点：解析：此处是分词短语作伴随状语。此时是主谓关系，故用putting。
7. many改为much。考点：解析：此处是回忆，不可数名词，所以用many。
8. 去掉to。考点：解析：accept之后不需要接to。
9. So 改为But。考点：解析：根据前后关系，应表示转折关系。
10．me改为I。考点：解析：作主语，应用主格。

Answer 2

高考英语试题分类汇编——改错
1.（10四川）
An English lady was finally decided that she really should 66_______
learn to drive, And after many attempts, she past her 67_______
driving test and told her husband that，to release， he 68_______
was going to drive him over to France for a holiday， But 69_______
then a week after the trip, she suddenly announced that 70_______
they wouldn’t take the holiday. “How did you change your 71_______
mind?” he asked her by surprise. “Well，it is all because 72_______
of the business of driving on right.” She said, “I have 73______
been practicing for three weeks now， but I still couldn’t 74______
get used to it-in fact, I’ve nearly killed three peoples。” 75______
66. 答案：去掉finally 前的was 解析：lady与decide 之间为主动关系
67. 答案：past→passed 解析：此处意为“通过”，应使用pass的过去式
68. 答案：he→she 解析：此处应为妻子要带丈夫去法国，应用女性的人称代词
69. √
70. 答案：after→before 解析：此处应为在此次旅行之间，妻子就因不适应右侧驾驶改变了主意
71答案：How→Why 解析：此处为丈夫对妻子突然改变主意不理解，而询问原因
72. 答案：by→in 解析：in surprise 为固定搭配，意为“惊奇地，惊讶地”
73. 答案：right→the right 解析：方位名词前腰加定冠词
74. 答案：couldn’t→can’t 解析：此处应为目前还不是要右侧驾驶，应用现在时。
75. 答案：peoples→people 解析：不可数名词
2.（10全国Ⅰ）
It was a chance of a lifetime to win the first 76_______ ____
prize on the Story Writing Show. All I had to do 77_______ ____
was to write a story or present it. My teachers 78_______ ____
have been telling me how great my writing was. 79___ ____
So if they had said was true, I would have a chance 80____ ___
of winning the prize . What were better , I had useful 81.
help . There was Uncle Chen , gentleman living 82.
near my house , who was a very much famous writer 83
He agreed to reading my story and give me some 84
advices on how to write like a real writer 85
76. 正确。
77. on改为in, in…show “在…节目里”。
78. or改为and，or表选择，and表顺接和并列。
79. have改为had，上下文时态要一致。
80. if后加what，what引导主语从句，在句中意思为“…的话”
81. were 改为was，不可数名词谓语动词用单数。
82. gentleman前加a，gentleman是可数名词。
83. much去掉，“非常出名”，very修饰形容词，very much修饰动词。
84. reading改为read，agree to do sth.“同意做某事”。
85. advices改为advice，advice是不可数名词。
3.（陕西）
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线（ ），并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
My sister saw a lovely cup when we are shopping the other day. She liked it at once. Then
she bent down and picked ^ up to look at a price on it. As she did this, lots of tea splashed on his
T-shirt! I had to try hardly not to laugh at her shocked face! My sister wanted ^ get out of the shop
as fast as she could when a shop assistant came over to us. It w\as turned out to be her own cup,
that she’d left on the shelf by mistake. The assistant was clearly as embarrassing as my sister,
for I just thought it was funny!
My sister saw a lovely cup when we are shopping the other day. She liked it at once. Then
were
she bent down and picked ^ up to look at a price on it. As she did this, lots of tea splashed on his
it the her
T-shirt! I had to try hardly not to laugh at her shocked face! My sister wanted ^ get out of the shop
Hard to
as fast as she could when a shop assistant came over to us. It was turned out to be her own cup,
that she’d left on the shelf by mistake. The assistant was clearly as embarrassing as my sister,
which embarrassed
for I just thought it was funny!
But/yet/while/and
4.（10全国Ⅱ）
Christie was one of my best friend at high school 76
At that time, we often spend time together. 77
Thank to her help, I made great progress in my 78
study. Last year, she decided to study abroad. In 79
other words, we would be separated for long time. 80
Before her leaving off, I prepared a gift to show 81
my best whishes to him. She said it was the best 82
gift she has ever had. From then on, we’ve 83
kept touch with another through e-mails. I 84
look forward to see her again in the near future. 85
答案：
76. friend → friends. one of 后接名词复数
77. spend →spent. At that time表示过去发生的事情
78. Thank →Thanks. Thanks to 是固定短语，“多亏了，因为”
79. √
80. for a long. For a long time表示“一段时间”，固定短语
81. 去掉off. leave 已经表示离开之意，off多余
82. him →her. 代词使用要一致。
83. has →had.时态错误，应为过去完成时。
84. kept ∧in touch 固定短语keep in touch with表示“与人保持联系”
85. see →seeing. look forward to中的to是介词，后接动词时要用动名词形式。
5.（10辽宁）
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10初语言错误，每句中最多有两处。对标有题号的每一行作出判断：如无错误，在该行右边横线上画一个勾（√）如有错误（每行只有一个错误），则按下列情况改正：
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符合(^)，在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。
修改：在错的词下划—横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.至允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Christine was just a girl in one of my class. I never knew much about
her except for that she was strange. she didn’t talk many .her hair was black
and purple, and she worn black sports shoes and a black sweater ,although in the
summer .she was ,in fact, rather attractively, and she never seemed ^care what
the rest if us thought about her like the rest of my classmate ,I didn’t really
together that I begin to understand why Christine dressed the way she did .
Christine was just a girl in one of my class. I never knew much about
her except for that she was strange. she didn’t talk many .her hair was black
去掉for 解析：except that中不能再用for。
many→much 解析：修饰动词talk应该用much，此处是副词，many没有此用法。
and purple, and she worn black sports shoes and a black sweater ,although in the
worn→wore解析：谓语动词用过去式，不能用过去分词
although→even 解析：although是连词，不能修饰介词短语，even可以
summer .she was ,in fact, rather attractively, and she never seemed ^care what
attractively→attractive解析：做表语，用形容词 seemed →seemed to 解析：seem后用带to的不定式
the rest if us thought about her like the rest of my classmate ,I didn’t really
classmate→classmates 解析：名词需用复数
want to get closest to her . it was only when we did their chemistry project
closest→close 解析get是连系动词，后跟形容词 their→our解析：人称和前面一致
together that I begin to understand why Christine dressed the way she did .
begin→begin 解析：时态前后不一致
6.（10重庆）
Here is my idea about how a friend is like. Firstly, 76.
a friend is someone you can share your secrets. If you 77.
tell him a secret, never will he talks about it with anybody 78.
else. Besides, a friend is always good listener when you 79.
need one. After hear your sad stories, he will say some 80.
words that is nice and warm. Still, your happiness makes 81.
him happily too. What’s more, a good friend is willing to 82.
offer the help to which you need, or can at least give you 83.
some advices. In a word, friends are those you like and 84.
trust, and you will enjoy every minute that you spent with 85.
them.
解析：
76. how what,由what引导宾语从句，从句中like缺宾语。
77. 在secret之后加with，share sth. with sb.
78. talks talk，will后须加动词原形。
79. 在always之后加a，listener是可数名词，且是泛指。
80. hear hearing，after是介词，后接名词或动词-ing形式。
81. is are，that代指先行词words，所以谓语动词要用复数。
82. happily happy，形容词作宾语补足语。
83. 去掉to，which you need作定语，意为：提供你所需的帮助。
84. advices advice，advice是不可数名词。
85. spent spend，前后时态须一致。
7.（10浙江）
After shopping, Mother and I went to a restaurant for lunch. I notice Mother looking at a

nearby table occupy by an elderly woman and young couple. They are silently, and it was clearly

that things were not going well. As we left, Mother stopped on their table. “Excuse me,” she said,

put her arm around the unhappy old woman. “You remind me so many of my mother. May I hug ”
(拥抱) you?” The woman smiled happily as she accepted to it. After we left, I said, “That was
very nice of you, Mother. So I didn’t think she looked like Grandma.” “Neither did me.” said

Mother cheerfully. k*s5u
1. notice 改为noticed 解析：本文的时间都是一般过去时态。
2. occupy改为occupied
解析：此处是分词短语作后置定语，occupy 与table是被动关系，故应用过去分词。
3. young之前加上a。考点：解析：从下文可知是一对夫妇，所以需加冠词。
4.clearly改为clear。考点：解析：此处是作表语，用形容词形式。
5. on改为by或at。考点：解析：被桌子挡住了，应用by或at。
6．Put改为putting。考点：解析：此处是分词短语作伴随状语。此时是主谓关系，故用putting。
7. many改为much。考点：解析：此处是回忆，不可数名词，所以用many。
8. 去掉to。考点：解析：accept之后不需要接to。
9. So 改为But。考点：解析：根据前后关系，应表示转折关系。
10．me改为I。考点：解析：作主语，应用主格。

Answer 3

I learned early in life that I had to be more patient and little(改为less) aggressive . From the time I was about four until I was about six, I destroyed each of my toy(改为toys). I was happy when the toys worked , but when things did (改为went或加上 go)wrong, I got angry and broke it(改为them) . For a while(加上my) parents bought me new toys . But before long they began to see which(改为what) was happening . When I tear(改为tore) apart my fifth birthday toy train , my father said, "That's it . No more toys to(改为for) you." My punishment lasted a year. Meanwhile, I found out that with more patience . I must (改为could 或might)make my toys to（去掉to） last . My attitude changed from then on.题和答案都是今年的高考题。