Question

英语的书面表达，急用

假如你叫李明，是一所学校的一名高三学生，高考已经临近，你最近对本年级的100名同学，男女各半的报考择业作了次调查，情将结果用英语写一份报告给某中学英文报编辑，报告要包括所有内容。调查情况如下：businessman.男25%女15%…teacher男5%女35%…doctor男女各15%…scientist男30%女15%…lawyer男女各5%…不知道的有各5％……一定要原创…谢谢

Answer 1

Dear Reporter:
My name is Liming, and i am a high school student in grade-three. As the opprosing of National Matriculation Test, recently, i've conducted a servey among 100 students, that have 50 boys and 50 girls, about choosing their future career. The survey shows that 25% boys and 15% girls would like to be businessmen or Office Lady in future and only 5% of boys and 35% of boys choose to be teachers. As for doctor, the numbers come the same, 15%. Being a scientist is 30% boys and 15%girls' dream. 5%of boys and girls prefer to be a lawyer. To my surprise, there are 5% of them who don't know. And i hope the survey will be useful to you.
thanks.
Sincerely
(xml_lx edit from stormsue's article,with some grammer thanks!)

Answer 2

The name is Liming, and i am a grade-three student in a high school. As the National Matriculation Tests are coming, recently, i conducted a servey among 100 students, 50 boys and 50 girls, about choosing their future career. The survey shows that 25% boys and 15% girls would like to be businessmen or businesswomen in future and only 5% of boys and 35% of boys choose to be teachers. As for doctor, the numbers are the same, 15%. Being a scientist is 30% boys and 15%girls' dream. 5%of boys and girls prefer to be a lawyer. To my surprise, there are 5% of them who don't know. And i hope the survey will be of use to you.
thanks.