Question

这篇作文怎么写？

这篇作文怎么写？初一英语

Answer 1

Today is my birthday ,I was very happy .I had a birthday party in my home .Kitty ,Peter ,Joe ,Uncle John ,Aunt Mary and also Jessica came to my party.I was so happy.
We ate chicken wings ,birthday cake ,crab and vegetable salad .It was so great!Then we drank some green tea ,orange juice and lemon tea .We played card games ,had a barbecaue and played badminton .Uncle John gave me a present .'' Oh!It's a cute doll!'' I said
Today I felt happy !I enjoyed my wonderful party very much !

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稍稍改一下

我写的是自己的生日

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符合要求吗

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等一下

我帮你再改一改

Last May 4th was uncle birthday.had a party at my home.
去年5月4日是舅舅的生日.有一个聚会在我的家.

My relatives and friends came to my home in the evening.And uncle got a lot of presents from them.My mother prepared a big birthday cake for uncle
我的亲戚和朋友来到我的家里在晚上.我收到了很多礼物从他们.我的妈妈准备了一个大的生日蛋糕给我.

我的亲戚和朋友来到我的家里在晚上.舅舅收到了很多礼物从他们.我的妈妈准备了一个大的生日蛋糕给舅舅

中文打错了，第二次是对的

Now I want to say “Thank you my friends.Thank you my parents!I ’m so happy

现在我想说，舅舅生日快乐

要不再帮你改一下

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好的，谢谢

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可以吗

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Answer 2

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