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When I opened the door, I knew someone have(had) been in the house. Things were different. Earlier that morning, I had seen the (a) man standing outside. This (that) man was probably waiting (for) me to leave the house. I went into the kitchen and find (found) the window (was删除) open. I was(were) sure I had closed them (it) earlier. I knew sth very strangely(strange) was going on. I (had删除) just got to the top of the stair when I heard a noise coming (in删除) from the bedroom . Slowly, I opened the door and there, lying (lying删除) in the middle of the bed, were (was) my sister! She was sleepy (sleeping)!
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open the door
I know someone had been in the house
I have seen the man
this man was waiting for me to leave the house
I go into the kitchen
I am sure I had closed them earlier
I had——had去掉
strangely——strange
got——go
sleepy改为sleeping
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亲请稍等,我帮亲看看
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好的 感谢!会耐心等待
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When I opened the door, I knew someone [have] (---has been in the house. Things were different. Earlier that morning, I had seen the man standing outside. This man was probably waiting (<for ) me to leave the house. I went into the kitchen and [find] (---found) the window [was] (---were) [open] (---opened). I was sure I had closed them earlier. I knew something very [strangely] (---strange) was going on. I had just got to the top of the stairs when I heard a noise coming [in] (---out) from the bedroom. Slowly, I opened the door and there, lying [in] (---on) the middle of the bed, [were] (---was) my sister. She was [sleepy.] (---sleeping)
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你先采纳好吗
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先发后采纳哟 因为很多人是骗采纳的 😜
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1kenw O(∩_∩)O好的 (。・_・。)ノ
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