Question

翻译一下这篇英语。 是改错题。顺便把其中错误的地方指出来。

One day , my mother and I sit around a fire . ①【】
She told me how she had met my dad . She was worked ②【】
in a hospital at that time as nurse . My dad was a ③【】
patient whom was being treated in the hospital . There ④【】
they met for the first time . My dad was impressed on my ⑤【】
mother at first sight . She took good care of him . By the ⑥【】
time she recovered and got out of the hospital , they had ⑦【】
got along quite well for each other . She lived in the ⑧【】
countryside , 20 mile from where my dad lived . He rode ⑨【】
a bike to visit to her every week until they got married . ⑩【】
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原文就是这样，括号代表前面一句话有一个错误的地方。 求教啦。 回答的好，我一定给分。
第8个和9个。嘿嘿，谢谢啦

Answer 1

更正楼上答案如下：

1. sit 改成 sat
一般过去时
2. worker 改成 working
非被动，而是过去进行时
3. as和nurse中间加入a
nurse是可数名词
4. whom 改成 who
该关系代词在定语从句中坐主语，所用用主格who，不用宾格whom
5. on改成by/with
be impressed by/with... 对...印象深刻
6. 此行无错
at first sight是固定短语，first前面不必加the
7. she改成he
是他爸爸住院出院
8. for 改成 with
固定短语 get along well with sb，意思是“和某人相处融洽”
9. mile 改成 miles
mile是可数名词
10. 去掉to
visit做动词时，是及物动词，其后无须介词就可以直接加宾语her

Answer 2

1,sit改成sat，因为是过去时
2.working，was worked是被动。
3.as a nurse 加a，名词前加a，
4.whom改成who，whom做宾语
5.不用被动，直接用impressed on，给谁留下印象，原文是表被动了
6 at the first sight，要加the 表示第一眼
7she改成he，因为是爸爸生病
8.去掉for
9from前加away
10visit之后to去掉，直接加宾语。
原因我不是都写了吗？