Question

请帮我看看有没有语法错误，万分感谢

After to finishing the project, I have learnt about how to use the internet to find the useful information. As is well-known, some information on the internet is unbelievable so I use creditable site such as government sites and compared much information. In order that I could decide which information is important. In addition, I find doing project can unconsciously improve my reading skill. Not only is it a good experience to know about my country, but also it can improve my English skill. When I finished it, I had a sense of accomplishment, because I worked hard to do it.
If I did another project in the future, I would try to write better questions in my Plan and search the information in more detail. I definitely recognize that doing the project needs so many efforts especially when I have to do it in English.
再看看下面这段话有没有语法错误
According to family planning's prescript, it encourage people late marriage and childbearing and advocate one child in town's family. The one child policy is the population control policy of the People's Republic of China. It officially restricts the number of children married urban couples can have to one, although it allows exemptions for several cases, including rural couples, ethnic minorities, and parents without any siblings themselves.

Answer 1

After finishing the project, I have learnt how to use internet to find the useful information. As it is well-known, some information on the internet is unbelievable so I would use creditable site such as government websites and try to confirm the information from different resources so to get rid of those wrong ones. In addition, I have found doing project can automatically improve my reading skill, which is a good experience to know about my country and at the same time it can improve my writing skill in English. When I completed it, I have had a wonderful feeling and
been proud of my achievement through all the hard work.
If I did another project in the future, I would try to organize my questions in better way in my Plan and search the information in more detail. I have definitely recognized that doing the project needs so much efforts especially when I have to do it in English. Therefore I must work hard to imprive my English.

Good luck!

追问

麻烦再帮我看看这个问题，感谢

http://zhidao.baidu.com/question/457223149.html?oldq=1

Answer 2

to finishing 不对 不要to

追问

那可以说After to finish the project吗

追答

after 是介词，后面用ing

Answer 3

太多错了

追问

麻烦帮忙看看额，谢谢了

追答

没那么多时间
不好意思
把基础知识要掌握好，基本的都不知道杂写作文哦

Answer 4

After finishing the project, I have learnt about how to use the internet to find the useful information. As is well-known, some information on the internet are suspect ，so I use creditable site such as government sites， and I also compared many different information in order that I could decide which information is important. In addition, I find that doing project can unconsciously improve my reading skill. It is not only a good experience to know about my country, but also it can improve my English skill. When I finished it, I had a sense of accomplishment, because I worked hard .

If I did another project in the future, I would try to write better questions in my Plan and search the information in more detail. I definitely recognize that doing the project needs so many efforts especially when I have to do it in English.

我改了一下，你看一看，有一些标点问题和用词我也改了，我不打善于改错，但是觉得表达的不太舒服的地方我就做了一点变动。

According to family-planning regulations, both late marriages and late childbirth were encouraged ,it also advocate that one family in town just have one baby.

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Answer 5

After finishing the project, I have learnt about how to use the internet to find useful information. As it is well-known that some information on the internet is unbelievable. So I use creditable sites such as government sites and much compared information in order to select useful information. In addition, I find doing project can unconsciously improve my reading skill. Not only is it a good experience to learn about my country, but also it can improve my English skills. When finishing it, I had a sense of accomplishment, because I worked hard to do it.
If I did another project in the future, I would try to put forward better questions in my Plan and search the information in more detail. I definitely admit that doing the project needs so many efforts especially when I have to do it in English.

According to family planning's prescript, it encourages late marriage and childbearing and advocates one child in urban families. The one child policy is the population control policy of the People's Republic of China. It officially restricts the number of children. Urban couples can have one child, although it allows for several exceptions, including rural couples, ethnic minorities, and parents without any siblings themselves.