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请英语好的人帮忙看一下这两个句子有无语法错误！谢谢您了

1,Wiht the China`s refrom and opening up that greatly improved the standard of living for average man,Three Represent,and the Eight-Honor and Eight-Shame outlook to which take root in the hearts of the people;many social problem deserve our attention,however.
2,I would think to be th better to the point were I charge the famous saying in other words of the Kennedy:"Ask not what our country can do for you;ask what your can do for you country".
由于我没学过语法我没学过语法，只是我写的外语是靠背过英文来写的，所以我难免会有很多错误，你们的回复都很好，时间紧迫下面是我写的原意还请大伙予以斧正！谢谢您！
一,With the China`s refrom and ......many social problem deserve our attention,however.
随着中国的改革开放以及“三个代表”和：“八荣八耻”的深入人心，极大的改善了百姓的生活水平，然而很多社会问题也引起了我们的关注。
二,如果我能够更好的指明其观点，我想要改变一下“肯尼迪”总统那句著名的话：“不要问我们的国家能为你做些什么，而要问你能为你的国家做些什么”。（这是一句虚拟语气省略倒装句，我觉得大致的框架应是这样，就是不知道其中细节的对错。这句就不用改了因为是一句名言：Ask not what our country can do for you;ask what you can do for your country。）

Answer 1

我改答案了哦，之前还觉得很奇怪！现在想想你还真厉害！
您第一个句子写得太复杂了点，没有主语，另外，
with打错了！
China`s refrom and opening up greatly improved the standard of living for average man,Three Represent and the Eight-Honor and Eight-Shame outlook to which take root in the hearts of the people，however，many social problem deserve our attention.

I wish I could express his ideas better,for which I would like to changge the famous saying of the Kennedy:"Ask not what our country can do for you;ask what you can do for your country".

Answer 2

1,Wiht the China`s refrom and opening up that greatly improved the standard of living for average man,Three Represent,and the Eight-Honor and Eight-Shame outlook to which take root in the hearts of the people;many social problem deserve our attention,however

1. With the China reforms and opens up to the global market, the standard of living for the citizens were greatly improved. The priciple of Three Represent,and the Eight-Honor and Eight-Shame takes root among the citizens, however, there are many social problems deserve our attention.

2,I would think to be th better to the point were I charge the famous saying in other words of the Kennedy:"Ask not what our country can do for you;ask what your can do for you country".

2. Let's goes straight to the point, I would like to take the famous saying of the Kennedy : :"Ask not what our country can do for you;ask what you can do for our country".

let's hopes this is what you meant.