Question

帮我看看我这篇英语作文有什么错误么 谢谢

要求
1.高考刚刚结束，回忆自己当年在高考时刻的想法（紧张，兴奋，恐惧等）
2.对于“高考那段时间，是我人生文化水平的巅峰”的看法
3.对于高考一考定终身的看法和建议
Remembering the university entrance exam ,I was very nervous and frightened at that time because the exam might decide whether my life would be successful.Many students attend the university entrance exam every year just as what I did three years ago.I suggest that we shouldn't pay much attention to the university entrance exam and give our children too much pressure.It's not a decision,but just an exam.Nowadays,I seldom use my knowledge which I have learned before high school graduation.For example,physical,chemistry and politics.But when I sometimes communicate with my freinds about scholarly attainments,I have forgotten so much what I used to know.So I think that the period of the university entrance exam,my cultural level is peak all my life.

Answer 1

找出几个问题

Remembering the university entrance exam,感觉生硬

尝试改为 i remember that in the university entrance exam,

For example,physical,chemistry and politics

表卜掘核示物理学 用 physics或者physical 型掘sciences; for example后面接名词通常只有一个名词，一般都是句散隐子;

But when I sometimes 别扭,改成 but sometimes when I;

I have forgotten so much what 改成

i have forgotten so much of what；

So I think that the period of the university entrance exam,my cultural level is peak all my life.

在高考时期，我的文化水平达到了一生中最顶端

So i think that i was at the peak of my cultural level in my life when i attended the university entrance exam