Question

初中升高中英语面试文章

My name is ZhengBin . Today I'm very gald to be here. though I feel little nervous . But i believe myconfident will let veverybody believe in me..
I was born in Shanghai . I'm a 16-year-old boy who is good at playing the piano . I'm not a outgoing person . But very kind boy.
I hope you can remember me .Zhengbin thanks you .

这是我写的。。 有哪里可以修改或怎么补充 。。 我感觉太短了。求高手
那个Thanks 是笔误

Answer 1

1. litttle nervous- a little nervous 没有a就是几乎不紧张
2. confident- confidence confident是形容词，要变成名词
3. a outgoing person- an outgoing person 这个不解释
4. but very kind boy 请告诉我主谓语在哪？
我改写了一下 你看看
hello everyone!
My name is Zheng Bin . I'm very glad to be here though I feel a little nervous. I hope my performance will give you a good impression. I
I was born in Shanghai and I love this city very much. This city is beautiful, modern. Right now I'm 16 years old and soon I will be high school student. I'm good at playing the piano because I love music so much. Music is one of the best things in the world, don't you agree?
Please remember my name-- Zheng Bin!
不知道你的信息，自己再改一下