Question

英语问题，谢谢了

英语问题，谢谢了天气在下雨时气温会下降，注意安全和保暖
The temperature will fall down when it still raining and Please pay attention to safety and keep warm. 我英语这么翻译有没有问题，谢谢了

Answer 1

问：The temperature will fall down when it still raining and Please pay attention to safety and keep warm. 我英语这么翻译有没有问题？
答：这样翻译比较合适哦：The temperature will drop when it rains, pay attention to safety and warmth

Answer 2

基本正确。但when 后应该是一个时间状语从句，句中缺谓语动词，所以应在it后加 is 。