Question

很急！请帮我看下我翻译的信用证条款是否合适？谢谢！

In accordance with the terms of Article 7a of UCP 600 we advise,
without any engagement on our part, having received the following teletransmission
根据我行通知的UCP600第七条A款，除此之外，我方不承担任何责任，因为我行收到了下列电传：

46B DOCUMENTS REQUIRED: 所需单据：
FULL SET OF ON BOARD MARINE BILLS OF LADING TO ORDER OF ISRAEL DISCOUNT BANK OF NEW YORK N.Y. L/C A-53915 MARKED NOTIFY APPLICANT.
整套海运提单按照纽约的以色列贴现银行 通知申请人（有点连不起来，不太明白意思）

78 INFO TO PRESENTING BK:交单行：
+ALL DOCUMENTS ARE TO BE DESPATCHED TO US AT 511 FIFTH AVENUE NEW YORK,NY 10017 IN ONE LOT BY AIRMAIL.所有的单据一起空邮给我们，地址是：纽约第五大街511号。

48B PERIOD FOR PRESENTATION:交单期：
DOCUMENTS MUST BE PRESENTED WITHIN 15 DAYS AFTER THE SHIPMENT DATE BUT WITHIN THE VALIDITY OF THE CREDIT.
48B我的翻译是在信用证有效期内，单据必须在装运日后15天内提交。

Answer 1

这不是进出口贸易实物里面的案例么!
In accordance with the terms of Article 7a of UCP 600 we advise,
without any engagement on our part, having received the following teletransmission
兹根据UCP600第七条A款通知贵司，本通知对我行不受任何约束，我行收至如下电传：
46B DOCUMENTS REQUIRED: 所需单据：
FULL SET OF ON BOARD MARINE BILLS OF LADING TO ORDER OF ISRAEL DISCOUNT BANK OF NEW YORK N.Y. L/C A-53915 MARKED FREIGHT PREPAID AND NOTIFY APPLICANT.
全套签清洁已装船海运提单，注明“运费已付”，收货人背书给ISRAEL DISCOUNT BANK OF NEW YORK N.Y. L/C A-53915 ，通知人为开证申请人

78 INFO TO PRESENTING BK:交单行的指示：
+ALL DOCUMENTS ARE TO BE DESPATCHED TO US AT 511 FIFTH AVENUE NEW YORK,NY 10017 IN ONE LOT BY AIRMAIL.所有单据一次全部空邮寄给我们，地址是：纽约第五大街511号。

48B PERIOD FOR PRESENTATION:交单期：
DOCUMENTS MUST BE PRESENTED WITHIN 15 DAYS AFTER THE SHIPMENT DATE BUT WITHIN THE VALIDITY OF THE CREDIT.
装船后15天内，但必须在信用证的有限期内

Answer 2

FULL SET OF ON BOARD MARINE BILLS OF LADING TO ORDER OF ISRAEL DISCOUNT BANK OF NEW YORK N.Y. L/C A-53915 MARKED NOTIFY APPLICANT.
整套海运提单，收货人：纽约的以色列贴现银行指示，通知人：开证人

DOCUMENTS MUST BE PRESENTED WITHIN 15 DAYS AFTER THE SHIPMENT DATE BUT WITHIN THE VALIDITY OF THE CREDIT.
单据应在装货后15日内提交，但必须在信用证有效期内

追问

其他的翻译可以吗？那个“收货人：纽约的以色列贴现银行指示”我觉得怪怪的，初学者不要见怪，指示两个字去掉好像更通

追答

to order 提单是指示提单，即可以凭指示转让货权。

Answer 3

46B DOCUMENTS REQUIRED: 所需单据：
FULL SET OF ON BOARD MARINE BILLS OF LADING TO ORDER OF ISRAEL DISCOUNT BANK OF NEW YORK N.Y. L/C A-53915 MARKED NOTIFY APPLICANT.
整套已装船的海运提单做成抬头（就是收货人）为凭纽约的以色列银行指示，通知人为开证人。

48B PERIOD FOR PRESENTATION:交单期：
DOCUMENTS MUST BE PRESENTED WITHIN 15 DAYS AFTER THE SHIPMENT DATE BUT WITHIN THE VALIDITY OF THE CREDIT.
单据必须在信用证有效期内提交，并且要在装运日的15天内。

追问

其他两句翻译行吗？

追答

行。