Question

请帮助修改这句语法错误 急

Effective, frequent communication and collaboration among doctors and nurses is necessary for successful implementation of the ABCDE bundle into practice.
感觉有几处语法错误，请高手帮忙

Answer 1

语法错误倒算不上，就是句子不太通顺，用词和句型不太恰当，effective和frequent ，communication和collaboration都是汉语直接翻译过来的，有点儿冗长，多余，建议根据原句意思换换词。我试着改了改，感觉还是有点儿欠妥，仅供您参考哈~
The effective communication and collaboration among doctors and nurses is indispensable to the successful implementation of the ABCDE bundle.

Answer 2

Effective and frequent communication and collaboration among doctors and nurses are necessary for the successful implementation of the ABCDE bundle.

开头两个形容词用and连接；communication and collaboration已经是复数应该用are；successful implementation前面加定冠词；implementation已经是put into practice的意思，后面再加into practice属于同义反复应删除。

Answer 3

仅发现一处错误，希望对你有帮助！
该句中的中心词为“communication and collabration"为复数所以说谓语应为“are"而不是“ls"

Answer 4

Effective and frequent communication ,collaboration among doctors and nurses are necessary for successful implementation ............. 后面的两个名词我认为用and连接的话有歧义，are的错误大家都指出了。

Answer 5

Effective, frequent communication and collaboration between doctors and nurses are necessary for successful implementation of the ABCDE bundle into practice.
感觉有几处语法错误，请高手帮忙