Question

求高手英语翻译

电子商务发展到今天，消费者网上购物的维权问题引起更多有关部门的重视。我国目前在这方面的法治建设进程较缓，没有太具体和明细相关法律维护网络消费者的权益；遇到相关问题比如买假、劣质产品如何索赔；预付了款却被骗如何维权等一系列法律问题等都没有非常具体的法律相关明细。本论文首先以研究网络团购为背景描述其特点、优劣势和目前出现的主要问题；其次通过真实案例利用《产品质量法》和《消费者权益保护法》将围绕关于网络团购中遇到的法律问题进行研究和分析，最后对目前现阶段网络团购出现的问题提出一些行业和法律规范的建议，给国内网络团购的发展提供一个参考。
求高手翻译这一段话，语句通顺即可，切忌GOOGLE,等乱翻译，给高分

Answer 1

电子商务发展到今天，消费者网上购物的维权问题引起更多有关部门的重视。我国目前在这方面的法治建设进程较缓，没有太具体和明细相关法律维护网络消费者的权益；遇到相关问题比如买假、劣质产品如何索赔；预付了款却被骗如何维权等一系列法律问题等都没有非常具体的法律相关明细。本论文首先以研究网络团购为背景描述其特点、优劣势和目前出现的主要问题；其次通过真实案例利用《产品质量法》和《消费者权益保护法》将围绕关于网络团购中遇到的法律问题进行研究和分析，最后对目前现阶段网络团购出现的问题提出一些行业和法律规范的建议，给国内网络团购的发展提供一个参考。Development of electronic commerce today, consumers' online shopping rights attract more attention of the relevant departments. At present in this aspect of the law construction process is slow, not too specific and detailed legal safeguard network consumer rights; with the relevant issues such as buy a fake, inferior products how to advance the claim; but being adults and a series of legal problems have not very specific legal related detail. This paper firstly in order to study the background of network group purchase describe its characteristics, advantages and disadvantages and the present main problems; secondly through a real example using the" product quality law" and" consumer protection law" will revolve about network group purchase of the legal issues encountered in research and analysis, finally the present stage network group purchase problem some industry and legal advice, give domestic network group purchase development to provide a reference.
这是我一个外国语大学毕业的姑姑翻译的，她虽学的是西班牙语，但是也懂一些英文，所以如果有错的话请见谅！

Answer 2

Development of electronic commerce today, consumers' online shopping rights attract more attention of the relevant departments. At present in this aspect of the law construction process is slow, not too specific and detailed legal safeguard network consumer rights; with the relevant issues such as buy a fake, inferior products how to advance the claim; but being adults and a series of legal problems have not very specific legal related detail. This paper firstly in order to study the background of network group purchase describe its characteristics, advantages and disadvantages and the present main problems; secondly through a real example using the" product quality law" and" consumer protection law" will revolve about network group purchase of the legal issues encountered in research and analysis, finally the present stage network group purchase problem some industry and legal advice, give domestic network group purchase development to provide a reference.

追问

请不要用GOOGLE翻译好吗?专业点·

Answer 3

The electronic commerce development today, consumers shopping online the rights cause more problems of the relevant departments of the attention. Our country at present in this aspect of rule of law construction process is slow, not too specific and detailed related legal support the network consumers' rights and interests; Meet related problems such as the fake and inferior products how to claim; Advance but were tricked into how to rights of a series of legal issues are not very specific law relevant details. This paper first to research network for bulk describe the characteristics, the background and the advantages and disadvantages of the present main problems; Second through the real cases using "product quality standard" and the consumer protection law surrounding network will meet in the bulk of the legal issues on research and analysis of the present network of the bulk of the problem of industry and puts forward some Suggestions of the legal standard, to the development of the domestic network team provides a reference.