Question

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I went to London by the train last summer. During my stay there,the weather was terrible and there were a lot of traffic and pollution.
We first went shopping in Oxford Street,but I didn't like them.I was bored.We then visited to lots of museums,which I didn't enjoy at all.My aunt might see that I was very unhappily and decided to take myself to the cinema.We went to see a Disney file in the end.On the third day we went for a long walk and it was very cold and start to rain.After that I was sick,so I read some comic books of my cousin's indoors and didn't leave the house
for rest of my time in London.It wasn't a very good holiday.
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Answer 1

I went to London by train last summer. During my stay there,the weather was terrible and there is a lot of traffic and pollution.
We first went shopping on Oxford Street,but I didn't like it.I was boring.We then visited lots of museums,which I didn't enjoy at all.My aunt might see that I was very unhappy and decided to take me to the cinema.We went to see a Disney file in the end.On the third day we went for a long walk and it was very cold and started to rain.After that I was ill,so I read some comic books of my cousin's indoors and didn't leave the house for rest of my time in London.It wasn't a very good holiday.

Answer 2

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by train
there was a lot of traffic
on Oxford Street
I didn't like it
We visited lots of museums
I was very unhappy
take me to the cinema
I read some comic books indoor

总觉得for the rest of my time in London怪怪的，有高人说说是不是就是这个有问题

Answer 3

其实我对英语并不陌生，你这篇文章我每个单词，每句话都看得懂，但我的语法不太好，所以找错这个问题我不太会，对不起！实在抱歉！

Answer 4

I went to London by train last summer