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1 Although all the students seem very happily at our school,as2 far as we concerned, the buildings would be more beautiful3 if the school could be decorated. We students though the school4 looks like a desert and the and concrete walls like the grey sky in5 a rainy day.We would be much happier and are able to study6 better if the walls of the school could be decorated with porters,7 photos and paintings,that could certainly broaden our horizons8 and enrich our lives.Original art work are too expensive ,but9 unless we buy art porters,the cost will be low.Using only a10 litle money,it can make our school a nicer place.

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1 Although all the students seem very happily(应该是 happy) at our school,as2 far as we(要加 were) concerned, the buildings would be more beautiful3 if (the school 改为 it) could be decorated. We students thought (要加 that) the school4 looks like a desert and the concrete walls like the grey sky in5 a rainy day.We would be much happier and (are 改为 be) able to study6 better if the walls of the school could be decorated with porters,7 photos and paintings,(that 改为which) could certainly broaden our horizons8 and enrich our lives.Original art(加 s) work are too expensive ,(去掉but)9 unless we buy art porters,the cost will be low.Using only a10 litle money,it can make our school a (加 much) nicer place.

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