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麻烦各位大神帮忙翻译一段话，语气一定要委婉哦

下午好艾伦，不好意思打搅你休息了。谢谢你能在百忙之中回我的邮件。很感谢你能指出我的缺点，以后我一定会努力去改正的。但是，我现在真的很迷茫，我渴望您能给我次机会，或者说给我提一些意见让我能够尽快的去英国学习。这几天我饮食难安，我知道现在意识到自己的错误已经迟了，但我真的需要您的肯定和帮助。拜托了艾伦！

Answer 1

Good afternoon Alan.
I apologise if I disturbed you from rest. Thank you for replying my email when you are so busy. I am most thankful for your pointing out of my mistakes. I promise to correct them very soon.
However, I am at a lost now! I hope you can give me a chance, or at least give me some comments so that I can go to study in the UK as soonas possible.
I feel very uneasy these days. I know it may be too late for me to recognise my mistakes, but I really need your confirmation and help. I beg you, Alan.

Answer 2

Good Afternoon Alan,

Sorry to disturb you. I appreciate your reply while you were busy, thanks for pointing out my mistakes of which i would try to remend it. Unfortunately it has came to bottle neck that i desperate need your guidance so i could fly to UK for study ASAP. It does really bothers me after finding out that it's might be too late for discover my mistakes. Your recognition and assisstance are now extremely needed. Looking forward to hear you, Alan.

Regards
XXX