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一封信，帮忙翻译~谢！

一封很重要的信，帮忙翻译一下，我有急用，自己翻译得好像好多病句~~
各位帮忙~~~谢了~

黄：
您好！
我是。。。好久没联系了，最近过得如何呢？
时间过得真快，在您一路的关怀中我踏上了大学的路。得知您还时常挂念我，我心中有说不出的感觉！有感动，您让我感受到春天般的温暖，像是久旱的甘霖滋润我的心灵，让我的学业蒸蒸日上。也有报歉，高考我发挥得很不近人意，我真的感到很对不起大家。SORRY
我现在。。。。的外语系就读商务日语。当然，我也没有放弃英语的，我深知在这个新环境里，我必须努力提高自己的素质，掌握好自己所要学的专业知识，拓展眼界。如今的大学让我能在自己的舞台里发挥才能。老师和同学都很欣赏我。为了锻炼我的能力，我还参加了学院举办的一些活动，比如学院的演讲比赛、书法大赛、英语辩论大赛、日语话剧表演等等，曾获院硬笔书法大赛三等奖，日语演讲二等奖等等。但我还会继续努力，争取更大的成功的！我还给我的大学生活量身定做了作息安排表，为我以后的职业定位做了差距测量，努力一步步地朝我的理想迈去！
此外，我还利用课外时间找了份兼职，在我们学校的一家书店里帮老板打理店的一些琐事，工资虽然不高，但毕竟是一个一箭又雕的好工作，您说对吧？
08年紧随着07年的悄然逝去，我觉得我长大了好多，谢谢你们一路上给我的关情给了我勇气，我希望在08年里我给让自己再次蜕变，也希望您身体安康，工作顺利。

Answer 1

首先这封信的风格的确很汉语式,但看没人来翻，我就斗胆试一下了，尽量忠实于你的大作。
Hi, Huang,

This is...
Haven't written to you for ages. How are things going?

Time really flies! With your help, I am at university now. Knowing that you are still conerned about me, I feel very much grateful and even deeply touched。 You offered me the enjoyment of spring warmth, like a sweet spring shower moistening my heart, encouraging me to work harder and do better every day. However, I am sorry for you all that I didn't perform very well in the college entrance examinations.
SORRY.

I am majoring in Business Japanese at Foreign Language Department,...University. Of course, I have never given up English learning. I know it very well that I must strenthen my ability, have a good command of all my courses, and broaden my outlook in this new world.The university today is a fair stage where I can make the most of my ability. Both my teachers and schoolmates sing high praise for me. I have taken part in many colleg activities to train my ability, such as the speech contest,the calligraphy contest, the English debate and the Japanes drama.I have won the third prize in the calligraphy contest, and the second prize in the Japanes speech contest, etc. However, I will go on, and make even greater success!I have also made a schedual for my university life, and a professional prediction for my future. I will realise my goal stey by step!

In addition, I have got a part-time job in my spare time，working as an assistant in a bookstore in our university, helping the shopowner with some daily things. Though the wages are not high, it is really killing two birds with one stone. Isn't it good?

The year 2008年 is already here and I feel that I have grown up with the passing of 2007. Thank you very much for all your conern and encouragement to me. I wish to make even better changes in 2008.

I sincerely wish you healthy and successful in your work!