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修改短文（改10处）This is a storytold by myfather:"When I was boy the most excitingthing

修改短文（改10处）This is a storytold by myfather:"When I was boy the most excitingthing waswhen to celebrate the Spring Festival.My grandma was the best cooker in theworldbut could make the most deliciousdishes.One time,I just couldn't wait theSpringFestival dinner.As I was about take apiece from a cooked duck,I saw Grandmainthe kitchen looking at me.Shake her head,"Itisn't a good time to do that,dear."Atonce,Iapologize and controlled me at my beat till thedinner started.You know,thatwas a dinner wehad waited for several month."

Answer 1

This is a story told by my father: "When I was a boy, the most exciting thing was when 【we】 celebrated the Spring Festival. My grandma was the best 【cook】 in the word, 【and】 could make the most delicious dishes. One time, I just couldn't wait 【for】 the Spring Festival dinner. As I was about to take a piece from a cooked duck, I saw Gradma in the kitchen looking at me. 【Shaking】 her head, 【she said】 "It isn't a good time to do that, dear." At once, I 【apologized】 and controlled 【myself】 until the diner started. You know, that was a dinner we had waited for 【for】 several 【months】.

自己改的，文章里有些地方语法不同，比如 "controlled me at my beat til" 我改成 “controlled myself".

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Answer 2

This is a story told by my father:"When I was （加入a） boy the most exciting thing was when（去掉when） to celebrate the Spring Festival.My grandma was the best cooker（cooker改为cook） in the world but（but改为and） could make the most delicious dishes.One time,I just couldn't wait （加入for）the Spring Festival dinner.As I was about（加入to） take a piece from a cooked duck,I saw Grandma in the kitchen looking at me.Shake（shake改为shaking） her head,"It isn't a good time to do that,dear."At once,I apologize（改为apologized） and controlled me（me改为myself） at my beat till the dinner started.You know,that was a dinner we had waited for several month（month改为months）."

Answer 3

This is a story told by my father:"When I was a boy ,the most exciting thing was to celebrate the Spring Festival.My grandma was the best cooker in the world.She could make most delicious dishes.One time,I just couldn't wait having the dinner for the Spring Festival .As I was about to eat a cooked duck,I saw my Grandma inthe kitchen looking at me,Shaking her head,"It isn't a good time to do that,dear."At once,I apologized and controlled me at my beat till the dinner started.You know,that was a dinner we had waited for several months."