Question

英文高手们来帮我看看这一小段话,怎样翻译比较适合?(拒绝机器翻译)

实习鉴定

XX同学从2007年7月4日至2007年8月25日，在我公司参加实习工作。在自动化事业部门参与产品加工及检测工作。
实习期间，该生学习了UG PRO/E等多种软件的的操作，对产品的构造和生产工艺有了初步了解。在GYTA33 2-144芯松套层绞式光缆的生产中，该生参与了参数检测计算，并协同大家很好的完成了任务。
经过一个多月的学习、实践锻炼，该生表现专业理论水平，显示出较强的团队合作能力和综合处理问题能力。同时，该生该生也表现出良好的学习能力和接受能力。积极的生活态度和广泛的兴趣使他很快的融入了团队，为集体增添了一份活力和朝气。
作为他实习工作的指导工程师，我相信他能够将所学的知识和积累的经念充分的运用在以后的学习工作中。

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一份中文的实习鉴定,请高手们帮忙翻译一下,准确且精炼!

谢谢!

Answer 1

手工，如下，供参考：

实习鉴定
Intership Appraisal

XX同学从2007年7月4日至2007年8月25日，在我公司参加实习工作。
This is to certify that student XX was having his/her internship with our company from July 4th to August 25th in 2007.

在自动化事业部门参与产品加工及检测工作。
He was assigned to work in the Automation Division and dealt with production manufacturing and testing.

实习期间，该生学习了UG PRO/E等多种软件的的操作，对产品的构造和生产工艺有了初步了解。
During the internship period, this student have learned application software of UG,PRO/E etc. and have acquired an elementary grasp of the structure and process of our products.

在GYTA33 2-144芯松套层绞式光缆的生产中，该生参与了参数检测计算，并协同大家很好的完成了任务。
In manufacturing GYTA33 2-144 loose tube stranded type optical fiber, he took part in the work of parameter test and calculation, and coordinated with others to complete the task successfully.

经过一个多月的学习、实践锻炼，该生表现专业理论水平，显示出较强的团队合作能力和综合处理问题能力。
During the period of over one month practice, we can see that the student have commanded good theory on his speciality, and be with strong team spirit and comprehensive capability in solving problems.

同时，该生该生也表现出良好的学习能力和接受能力。
Meanwhile,his capability in learning and accepting new things leave us a good impression.

积极的生活态度和广泛的兴趣使他很快的融入了团队，为集体增添了一份活力和朝气。
With his positive attitude and wide interests ,he fit into our team in a very short time and add new vatality to we collective.

作为他实习工作的指导工程师，我相信他能够将所学的知识和积累的经念充分的运用在以后的学习工作中。
As his guiding engineer during the practice,I believe that he is quite able to fully apply the knowledge and working experience he acquired to his future work and study.

Answer 2

Practice Identification

XXX students from July 4, 2007 to August 25, 2007, in my company participate in the internship. Automation sector participation in the processing and testing.
Attachment period, the student learning UG PRO / E and other software operation, the structure of the products and production processes with a preliminary understanding. GYTA33 2-144 in the core layer-cutter sets of fiber optic cable production, the student involved in the parameter detection, and coordinated the completion of all the tasks well.
After more than a month of study, practice and training, the student performance level of professional theory that a strong team and the ability to deal with the problem comprehensive capacity. At the same time, the Health and the Health also showed a good learning capabilities and capacities. Positive attitude towards life and a wide range of interest so that he quickly integrated into the team, as a collective add vitality and vigor.
He internship as the guiding engineer, I believe that he can be the accumulation of knowledge and the full use of by those in the study after work.

Answer 3

Practice Appraisal

Student XX attended our practice programm in our company from Jul4th to Aug25th in 2007.He worked in the automation departmart taking part in the production manufacturing and testing.

During his practice, he learnt the operation of series software such as UG ,PRO/E. He acquired the basic knowledge of the product's structure and manufacturing process. During the production term of GYTA33 2-144芯松套层绞式光缆(抱歉，专业词汇未能翻译), he took part in the parameters' test and calculation, coordinated with others to complete the task successfully.

After more than one month's learning, practising, he demonstrated high level of his professional theory. and showed us strong team cooperation spirit and comprehensive problem solving capability.Active living attitude and large range of hoppies make him merged into the team quickly, and added energy and vitality to the group.

As his practice guide engineer ,I believe he is able to fully apply the knowledge he learnt and experience he got to his future work and study.

Answer 4

Practice appraisal

XX schoolmate from July 4, 2007 to August 25, 2007, starts the
practice work in the our company. Participates in the product
processing and the examination work in the automated enterprise
department. Practice period, should live has studied UG PRO/E and so
on many kinds of software the operation, had the preliminary
understanding to the product structure and the production craft.
Twists the type optical cable in a GYTA33 2-144 core pine set of level
in the production, should live participated in the parameter
examination computation, and cordinated everybody to complete the task
very well. After more than months studies, the practice exercise,
should live the performance specialized theoretical level,
demonstrates the stronger team cooperation ability and the synthesis
processing question ability. At the same time, should live should live
also displays the good learning capability and accepts the ability.
The positive life manner and the widespread interest very quickly
caused him to melt into the team, has increased a vigor and the
vitality for the collective. Practises the work as him to instruct
engineer, I believed he will be able the knowledge and the
accumulation which will study after reads the full utilization in the
later study work.