Question

用英语写一篇短文,描述一下你的一次旅行

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Answer 1

I went to Lintong the year before last.I visited Mountain Li by myself at last for I didn't found my friend there. It was a little pity ,but it also worthy. I got the top of the mountain by cable car. It was frist time that I had experienced it. I hardly dared to get in it. When I was in it ,i felt fright at first,I couldn't even look out of the window to appreciate the beautiful scenery.To be lucky,I overcame my fright at last ,and I could saw lakes and broad green forest covered almost all the mountain ,and there were also many facilities for visitors to play. It was a feast not only the sight but also the sensory organs.I went on climb until I arrived Beacon Tower.I was proud for the Beacon Tower was so high that it was hard to achieve. It took willpover and strenghth.Moreover,I finished much quicker than others.The one which was worthy to relate was birds forest, in which there were many kinds of birds as well as other kinds of animals. You could heard the chirping of birds here and there,you could took photos with the animals you loved was aloo ok.
when It was dusky.I had to went home and said goodbye to Mountain Li.Though it was a short time but I would cherish it in my lifetime.
Bye,Mountain Li.

Answer 2

I have visited Hong Kong for a few days. It is a international city in China. The food tasted very good. Morevoer, there are so many things to buy.

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太短了，再说好像没写完吧