Question

求救英语达人帮我看一下这面这篇自我介绍有没有错误的地方，谢啦！

Leaders, Members:
Hello, everybody!
My name is Li Na, My English name is Amy.
from Hebei province,
I am cheerful, honest, easy to get along with others; likes climbing and
running.
I am very pleased and honored to join the
"GE Healthcare China" to the family, where not only provided me with
a growth exercise, showing a good platform for self, but also for giving me the
chance to meet more new colleagues, new friends. - To take, I am very grateful
to all the leaders, thank you all so give me a good opportunity.
There are many aspects of the knowledge I
need to learn, but also hope in future we can work great weekend!
I believe that through our mutual
understanding and mutual understanding, we will not only become a career go
hand in hand with the struggle of his comrades, life will be like-minded, woe
friend.
Finally, I would like and we can work
together for our common cause and work hard! dedecms.comThanks everyone!

Answer 1

修改如下 注：括号内为修改内容
(dear) Leaders, Members:
Hello, everybody!
My name is Li Na, My English name is Amy.
(I come) from Hebei province(.)
I am cheerful, honest, (and )easy to get along with others(. )(Also, I)likes climbing and
running.
I am very pleased and honored to join the
"GE Healthcare China" to the family, where not only provided me with
a growth exercise, showing a good platform for (me), but also (gave) me the
chance to meet more new colleagues, new friends. (To be honest,) I am very grateful
to all the leaders, thank you all so give me a good opportunity.
There are many aspects of the knowledge I
need to learn(.)(But I) also hope in future we can work( well together!)
I believe that through our mutual
understanding and mutual understanding, we will not only become （friends who）go
hand in hand with the struggle of his comrades, (also )like-minded, woe
friend(s).
Finally, I (sinserely hope that)we can work
together for our common cause and work hard! dedecms.comThanks everyone!
冒昧问一句，您是自己写的还是翻译器翻译的？
怎么怪怪的。。可能是我懂的不多，所以部分看不懂的以及语法不通的地方稍作改动。。

Answer 2

我很想加入贵社,希望贵社给我一次面试的机会。在旅游行业最关键的在于经验community for your work! 就这些了,你看看,欢迎指导. I very want