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Last Sunday is a sunny day,so I decided to go to the park with my best friends and have a picnic.We met at the gate of the school and went to park by bus.When we went around in the park,we saw people was cycling,eating and drawing,and every one looked very happy.Then we found a piece of lawn,and we had a picnic there.After that ,we went to the amusement park and had a good time there.When we went back to our houses,we decided to go to the park again in the summer vacation.(好家伙......我一个字儿一个字儿打的啊.....）
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I and my friends went to a picnic in the park
One day, the father said to take me to a picnic in the park, I'm very excited, immediately ready to equipment and food, ready to go.
I'll buy the water, father of driving. After a while, my father pulled over, I also bought water, I hasten to get on the bus, and then set out. Along the way, I wanted to think of the park is the first thing to do, and then the second thing is what. At the park, I first take everything down, and then find a suitable place for a picnic, and put the food down. Because I want to show yourself, so his statement, this meal by what I do. I first wood together, and put the fire up, and the fire, because some wet wood so I always they can't afford to get LaiHuo, still get a full face of grey smoked of tears, when to eat, I very not easy to cook dinner. Have a meal of the things I have also prepared, my father and I together with relish eat it, eating dad side with my praise. My heart is a sense of accomplishment, after dinner, I went to play, so to the evening has been playing, just go home. Today is my most happy day it is rewarding for a day.
One day, the father said to take me to a picnic in the park, I'm very excited, immediately ready to equipment and food, ready to go.
I'll buy the water, father of driving. After a while, my father pulled over, I also bought water, I hasten to get on the bus, and then set out. Along the way, I wanted to think of the park is the first thing to do, and then the second thing is what. At the park, I first take everything down, and then find a suitable place for a picnic, and put the food down. Because I want to show yourself, so his statement, this meal by what I do. I first wood together, and put the fire up, and the fire, because some wet wood so I always they can't afford to get LaiHuo, still get a full face of grey smoked of tears, when to eat, I very not easy to cook dinner. Have a meal of the things I have also prepared, my father and I together with relish eat it, eating dad side with my praise. My heart is a sense of accomplishment, after dinner, I went to play, so to the evening has been playing, just go home. Today is my most happy day it is rewarding for a day.
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可以在简短一点吗？太长了。。。你改一下我会给你加分的！O(∩_∩)O谢谢
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I and my friends went to a picnic in the park
One day, the father said to take me to a picnic in the park, I'm very excited, immediately ready to equipment and food, ready to go.
I'll buy the water, father of driving. I hurriedly get on the bus, and then set out. At the park, I first take everything down, and then find a suitable place for a picnic, and put the food down..
I saw some in riding a bicycle some eat some in the painting
Today is my most happy day it is rewarding for a day.
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我和朋友们一起去公园野餐
一天，爸爸说要带我去公园野餐，我非常兴奋，立刻准备好装备和食物，准备出发。
我先买水，爸爸去开车。我赶紧上车，然后就出发了。到了公园，我先把东西都放下来，然后找了个适合野餐的地方，再把食物放下去。。
我看见有的在骑自行车 有的在吃东西 有的在画画
今天是我最快乐的一天也是有收获的一天。
你参考一下吧 希望有用
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