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短文改错thankyouverymuchforinvitemetoyourbirthdaypartyinSaturdayevening.I’dliketocomeandI... 短文改错 thank you very much for invite me to your birthday party in Saturday evening. I’d like to come and I have to go to my hometown to see my grandparents. They were very old and are unluckily they are not in good health recontly . My mother has already made a telephone call to them and promised visit them with me this Saturday, my mother said we Will stay at my grandparents the whole weekend, so i am Real sorry i can not attend your party, i hope you Will understand all this, here i wish you a lot fun 展开
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1.invite改为inviting;
2.in改为on;
3.and改but;
4.see改visit;
5.were改are;
6.去掉and后面的are;
7.promised后加to;
8.will改would;
9.grandparents改grandparents’;
10. real改really;
a lot后加of
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thank you very much for invite(inviting) me to your birthday party in Saturday evening. I’d like to come and (but)I have to go to my hometown to see my grandparents. They were very old and are (去掉and)unluckily they are not in good health recontly . My mother has already made a telephone call to them and promised(to) visit them with me this Saturday, my mother said we Will (would)stay at my grandparents the whole weekend, so i am Real sorry i can not attend your party, i hope you Will understand all this, here i wish you a lot (of)fun
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invite 改成inviting,were 改成are,are unluckily 改成unlucky
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thank you very much for inviting me to your birthday party on Saturday evening.I'd like to come but I have to go to my hometown to see my grandparents.They are very old and unluckily, they are not in good health recently.My mother has already made a telephone call to them and promised to visit them with me this Saturday .My mother says we will stay at my grandparents' the whole weekend.so I am really sorry that Ican not attend your party.I hope you will understand all this,here I wish you have a lot of fun.
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thank you very much for inviting me to your birthday party on Saturday evening. I’d like to come but I have to go to my hometown to see my grandparents. They are very old and unluckily they are not in good health recently . My mother has already made a telephone call to them and promised to visit them with me this Saturday, my mother said we would stay at my grandparents' home for the whole weekend, so i am really sorry i can not attend your party.I hope you Will understand all this, and i wish you a lot fun
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invite---inviting and---but are删去 promised后加to will--would grandparents--grandparents' a lot后加of
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