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短文改错 During the weekend I travelled by the air for the first time in my life. I generally tr...

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During the weekend I travelled by the air for the first time in my life. I generally travel by train or by bus. It's all cheaper and safer. But this was a short journey. In the beginning I didn't fall happy, but this feeling wasn't last long. The journey was very exciting. I was soon high up in the sky among the cloud. The view of mountains, fields and rivers were interesting. I enjoyed my short and comfortably trip very much. This experience has been shown that travelling by air is actually safest way of making journeys.

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During the weekend I travelled by【删掉the】air for the first time in my life. I generally travel by train or by bus【because they are】cheaper and safer【, but】 this was a short journey. In the beginning I didn't【改fall为feel】 happy, but this feeling【改wasn't为didn‘t】 last long. The journey was very exciting. I was soon high up in the sky among the【改cloud为clouds】. The view of mountains, fields and rivers【改were为was】 interesting. I enjoyed my short and【改comfortably为comfortable】trip very much. This experience has【删掉been】shown that travelling by air is actually【加上the】safest way of making journeys.

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During last weekend I travelled by air for the first time in my life. I generally travel by train or by bus,which are both cheaper and safer. But this was a short journey. at the beginning I didn't feel happy, but this feeling didn't last long. The journey was very exciting. I was soon high up in the sky among the cloud. The view of mountains, fields and rivers was interesting. I enjoyed my short and comfortable trip very much. This experience has shown that travelling by air is actually a safest way of making journeys.