Question

急求把下面一段话翻译成英文！谢谢！

我曾于2011年5月递交申请，但上次签证官因为我没有出国记录和认为我准备的资金不足于承担旅行的花费而糟到拒签！
在此我想说明！我们一家3口的旅行费用将会由我和我丈夫共同承担！我们加起来有20多万港币存款，所以我们绝对能承担起这10天暑期旅行的一切费用！
我丈夫和儿子因为是香港永久居民持有HKSAR所以免签！
虽然我没有出国记录，所以我希望加拿大会是我的出国的第一程.未来我们一家也会慢慢丰富我们的出国旅行记录！

Answer 1

The officer refused my application in May,2011 because I neither have abord record nor enough money to support my travel.
Now I am here to claim that :
All expense spend in this travel will be provided by my husband and me together,and we have deposited over 200.000HK$ in bank,which is abosolutly enough for this 10 days' trip.Althogh I don't have abord record before ,I am quite sure our oversea trips will increase since this time,and we choose Canada as our first step.
Both my husband and my son are permanant residents of Hongkong and both of them have HKSAR,which allows them free of visa.

我根据语意的连贯性,将最后两句顺序改了一下.
欢迎来加拿大,GOOD LUCK.

Answer 2

I had submit my application in May,2011,and it was denied by reasons that there was no oversea record of mine and I provided not enough funds for the trip.
At this rate I have to make my statement,
1.All the travelling expenses will be claimed from me and my husband
2.we(I and my husband) have put together more than 200,000 HK dollars bank deposit.
3.we are definitely capable of affording a 10 days vocation abroad.
4.My husband and my son have the privilege granted by HKSAR to avoid this application.
5.we are looking forward to make a first record of oversea trip by travelling to Canada,and it is quite possible to have more records of us in the futrue
looking forward for your access!
翻得好，要给分！

Answer 3

I was in 2011 May submitted applications, but the last time the visa officer because I didn't think I'm ready to record and lack of funds to bear the travel cost and bad to refused!
Here I want to explain!We are a family of 3 travel costs will be shared by my husband and i!We add up to about 200000 dollar deposit, so we can assume that the 10 days of summer all the travel expenses!
My husband and son because is a permanent resident of Hongkong held a HKSAR so visa-free!
Although I have not traveled abroad, so I hope that Canada will go abroad is my first. The future our family will slowly enrich our travel abroad records!

Answer 4

I handed in my appliction in May 2005, but I was rejected because I didn't have abroad experience and enough money to afford the trip.
So I want to claim that my husband and I will take all the expense of my family. And we have savings of over HK$ 20,000 ,so we can definitely afford the cost of the 10 days trip.Because my husband and son are Hongkong permanent resdients so they are granted for visa-free right .
I have never been abroad before. So I strongly hope that Canada will be my first destination. And we will gradually step our feet on other amazing lands and enrich our experience of travelling abroad in the near future!