Question

请高手帮我翻译下一个句子： 当然是翻成英语。。。。

与非烟民相比，60岁及更老的烟民各类原因致死的风险提高了83%。与前烟民相比，烟民的死亡风险也高出34%。

Answer 1

Compred with non-somkers, the death rate in smokers of 60 year years old and over 60 increases by 86%. Compared with former smokers, the death rate of smokers is more than 34%.

Answer 2

下翻译软件

追问

噗，谢谢。我不需要翻译软件，那东西一向不准。。。。。

Answer 3

Smokers sixty and older had an eighty-three percent increased risk of dying from
all causes compared to people who had never smoked. Smokers also had a
thirty-four percent higher risk of death compared to former smokers.

追问

额，我就是在做VOA的paraphrase,所以不想要VOA上面的原句，可以翻译成其他的样子吗？谢谢

追答

尊重原句吧，原汁原味的英语。

追问

额。。。。我在做作业，。。。。要写出自己的感觉。。。。。不是尊重不尊重原句的问题，。。。