Question

Many people who leave school hold a negative attitude towards learning.Why does this happen?

How to solve the problem?
可以指导我一下如何写这篇作文吗?谢谢。

Answer 1

作文很好写的，一般都是3段式，以这篇为例。
第一段，描述现象，引入话题
一般可以借用一个调查结果（自己编），一句名言，然后引入话题。在第一段最后提出疑问，然后说以下几点可以解释这种现象。
比如 ，有个调查显示，超过80%的学生离开学校都很消极，甚至有些大学生会有毕业恐惧症，那么这到底是为什么呢，我想以下几点可以解释这个现象。
第二段，3-4个原因。（一般拿到题目，都要进行一次头脑风暴，主要想的就是第二段的内容，开头结尾都可以有比较固定的模式。 主要任务就是 进行思维的发散，因为只有你用中文有话可说了，你才能写出英文。）
比如，1、学生很迷茫，不知道要干什么。
2 、学生很彷徨，害怕进入社会
3 、大学氛围比较轻松，不适应社会节奏
4、 和学校、同学 、老师 感情深，舍不得离开
。。。。。。。
第三段，稍微总结一下，或者简单说一下自己 的 观点 或感受，
结束。。

Answer 2

What does learning involve?
School, teachers, content, co-learners.
1) When one finds learning boring, too difficult, or useless, one will leave or drop out. He has a negative opinion about learning.
2) When one finds a school boring, too hard on students, one will leave or drop out. He hates the school.
3) When one finds teachers don't love students, or can't make teaching interesting and lively, or easy to understand, one will abandon learning. He hates teachers and learning.
4) When one finds the learning content boring, too difficult, or useless, one will stop. He hates learning.
5) When one finds unfriendly co-learners, one will escape. He is afraid of being hurt.
All of these are negative factors.
The way to solve this problem is to turn all of the negative factors into positive ones.
Using your own language to develope these into an essay.