Question

帮我看下这篇英语作文有没有什么错误

关于毕业演讲的 这么可以吗Junior high school life is coming to an end here, I wish to thank my teachers, you have given me great help and support. Secondly, I would like to thank my classmates, thank you for your friendship and fraternity. Now, I would like to talk about my dream。 it is my great pleasure to share my dream with you today. my dream is to become a teacher. you know being a teacher is a thing that is very valuable and very interesting. i suggest that it must be a great fun to be with children all the day. and if i am a teacher, i can teach my students a lot of knowledge. they might become stronger and cleverer because of me. that is a very contented feeling. china is a developing country. chinese are not that excellent in their intellegent. so teachers in china might be very very important. they can provide the society with a lot of successful people, and make china a better place. do you think that i have a good dream？ i will work hard to make my dream become true! thanks~

Answer 1

you have given me great help and support 改为 you had given,因为这是过去的事情
i can teach my students a lot of knowledge换一句吧。teach sb sth 是教训的意思

Answer 2

teach sb sth 是教训的意思

Answer 3

可以