Question

请英语大神帮忙看一下有没有语法错误，谢谢！

At first sight, we may attracted by the big mountainous which was piled by books. What makes the cartoon surprising lies in the fact that a man is climbing the book mountain and trying to reach to the peak of it. There are some eye-catching words in this picture which reads:books are the stairs of human progress.
Undoubtedly, the cartoonist is subtly revealing the importance of reading. There is no denying that books not only bring entertainment but also can enrich our daily life. As for me, I always read some books which were write by Mo Yan, Lao Se and Lu Xun. I regard these books as my best friends which can provide me some different perspective to observe the world. What’s more, an interesting and meaningful book may change your world view and yourlife goal. However, a lot of people prefer to watch TV rather than read books. It goes with no exaggeration to say that watching too much TV is nothing but wasting time. Even worse, it may hurt our ability of imagination.
Books can create beautiful scenery for us which is a colorful and dimensional world. Therefore, it is necessary for us to read more books during our spare time.

我的表达会不会觉得像中国式英语？

Answer 1

还好，就是有几处语法错误，括号里为改正的：
At first sight, we may (be) attracted by the big mountainous which was piled by books. What makes the cartoon surprising lies in the fact that a man is climbing the book mountain and trying to reach to(去掉to，reach后直接加名词) the peak of it. There are some eye-catching words in this picture which reads（were read，被动）: books are the stairs of human progress. Undoubtedly, the cartoonist is subtly revealing the importance of reading. There is no denying（换成doubt，本身有名词形式的不用动名词） that books not only bring entertainment but also can enrich our daily life. As for me, I always read some books which were write（written，书写错误） by Mo Yan, Lao Se and Lu Xun. I regard these books as my best friends which can provide me some different perspective（这个单词复数） to observe the world. What’s more, an interesting and meaningful book may change your world view and your life goal. However, a lot of people prefer to watch TV rather than read books（prefer sth to sth就行，可不用rather than，但后面如果是动词的话要用动名词，watching TV、reading books）. It goes with no exaggeration to say that watching too much TV is nothing but wasting time. Even worse, it may hurt our ability of imagination. Books can create beautiful scenery for us which is a colorful and dimensional world. Therefore, it is necessary for us to read more books during our spare time.（可以去掉our，前面有us了）

整体来说，有些句子太复杂了，不好改，你自己再修饰下。

Answer 2

1. At first sight, we may attracted? by the big mountainous？ which was piled by books. What makes the cartoon surprising lies in the fact that a man is climbing the book mountain and trying to reach to the peak of it. There are some eye-catching words in this picture which reads:books are the stairs of human progress.
      Undoubtedly, the cartoonist is subtly? revealing the importance of reading. There is no denying that books not only bring entertainment but also can? enrich our daily life. As for me, I always read some books which were write? by Mo Yan, Lao Se and Lu Xun. I regard these books as my best friends which can provide me some different perspective to observe the world. What’s more, an interesting and meaningful book may change your world view？ and yourlife goal. However, a lot of people prefer to watch TV rather than read books. It goes with no exaggeration to say that watching too much TV is nothing but wasting time. Even worse, it may hurt our ability of imagination.
      Books can create beautiful scenery for us ？which is a colorful and dimensional world. Therefore, it is necessary for us to read more books during our spare time.

2. At first sight, we may be attracted by the big mountains which were piled by books. What makes the cartoon surprising lies in the fact that a man is climbing the book mountain and trying to reach to the peak of it. There are some eye-catching words in this picture which reads:books are the stairs of human progress.
      Undoubtedly, the cartoonist is revealing the importance of reading subtly. There is no denying that books not only can bring entertainment but also enrich our daily life. As for me, I always read some books which were writen by Mo Yan, Lao Se and Lu Xun. I regard these books as my best friends which can provide me some different perspective to observe the world. What’s more, an interesting and meaningful book may change your opinion of the world and your life goal. However, a lot of people prefer to watch TV rather than read books. It goes with no exaggeration to say that watching too much TV is nothing but wasting time. Even worse, it may hurt our ability of imagination.
      Books can create beautiful scenery for us and show us the colorful and dimensional world. Therefore, it is necessary for us to read more books during our spare time.

情态动词后面加动词原形

Answer 3

At first sight, we may be attracted to the huge moutains piled with books. However, what truly makes the cartoon surprising lies in the fact that a courageous man is climbing and trying to reach the peak of this mountain of books. There is an especially eye-catching phrase in this picture: books are the ladders of human progress.
Undoubtedly, the cartoonist is subtly revealing the importance of reading. It is undeniable that books not only entertain but also enrich our daily life. As for me, I always read books which were writen by Mo Yan, Lao Se and Lu Xun. I regard these books as my best friends who can provide me with different perspective to observe the world. What’s more, an interesting and meaningful book may change your world view and yourlife goal. However, a lot of people prefer to watch TV rather than to read books. It is not exaggerated to say that watching too much TV is nothing but wasting time. Even worse, it may hurt our ability of imagination.Books create beautiful a colorful and amazing world for us. Therefore, it is necessary for us to read more books during our spare time.

没什么时间，刚看到这个

Answer 4

不会的，全部都很好的。