Question

急急急！以下是我把一段中文翻译成英文，我翻译得对吗？语法正确吗？或者有更好的翻译吗？

Francis Bacon认为美丽不在于外表而是内心。美德好比宝石，它在朴素背景的衬托下反而更华丽。因为美丽是会凋谢的，而美德不会。所以我们应该把美貌和美德结合起来，才会让美丽发光。

Francis Bacon thinks that real beauty lies not in the physical,but in the heart.Virtue is like a rich stone,best plain set.Because of beauty will fade,but not goodness.So we should combine beauty and virtue that it to shine.

Answer 1

Francis Bacon thinks that real beauty lies not in the physical,but in the heart.Virtue is like a rich stone,best plain set.Because beauty will fade in the future,but not virture.So we should combine beauty and virtue together to shine.

Answer 2

in the physical “外表”翻译错误

Virtue is like 语法错误

rich stone 宝石不是这么翻译的
not goodness翻译成goodness will not会不会更好
that it to shine中that和it之间少个动词