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In present-society, there is no one who doesn't have a yearning for success, but what is the secret of success. Some people claims that we should do what we know to do well. However, others think we must try new things and take risks, as far as I am concerned, I concur that the second statement.

To begin with, trying new things is a kind of innovation which is closely related to success. In the fierce comprtition, what can helps us easily defeat others competitor, an old saying that“ be bold in putting things into practice and blazing new trails" is the answer to this question. Henry ford,one of the most influential inventors in the history, he unique and novel flow line production make he stand at the top of automobile industry. Due to Ford’s year of innovation, the history of transportation was changed forever. So trying new things is really significant.

Moreover, it is universally acknowledged that taking risks also contributes to sucess. In my view, taking risks can provides ue more opportunity to sucess. And the hero,Thomas Edison introduced an inexpensive alternative to candles and gaslight: the incandescent lamp. He should face the dangerous facilty or elements everyday, but his divine courage andbold in risk benifit us a lot. These bulbs were first installed on the steamship Columbia and have been lighting up the world ever since. Abviously, taking risks and success depend on each other for existance.

There is no denying that doing things we are good at is also important to us. We can regard it as the basic of work and then we can attempt to be createtive and courage. In this way, you would achieve your insurmountable dream. Let's talk about a household name Steve Jobs, who was the chief executive officer of Apple. We admire his achievement in the innovative Apple system and applications. In fact, without deep knowledge of basic computer system or electronic devices, he could not have put his innovation into use. Actually, successful people do take risks and try news after they have done what they have known for sure.

All in all, successful people try new things and make riskys instead of only doing the thing what they know how to do well.
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