Question

求英语高手，帮我修改一下这篇英语作文。急。快，就今天

My Summer Holiday
Everyyear, Our summer holiday is in July and August. It’s a long time, and I can domany things during this time. The weather is very hot in the summer holiday, we
must wear T-shirt and shorts. This summer holiday I graduated from elementary
school. So I don’t have summer homework. It makes me feel very happy. But I
also enrolled an English
class. In English class, and I get to know some new friends. They and I get along very happy . In my spare time, I always listen
to music and read books, sometimes I ride my bicycle. Oh, My bicycle is very
good.Time passes very quickly, Summer has passed half. I finally have the opportunity to travel. I am
going to visit the Yellow
Mountain tomorrow. I am
going to enjoy the beauty of the Yellow
Mountain. I hope that I
have a pleasant journey. And you?
以上统统为一段话

Answer 1

every year 分开

do many 分开

第二排的holiday后应该是句号，接下来的we大写

T-shirt应该是T-shirts

This summer holiday I graduated from elementary
school.应该是
Before this summer holiday，I just graduated from elementary
school.

In English class, and I get to know some new friends
改为In the English class，加上the
还有就是去掉and，
还有就是叙述你在课堂里的事情全部应该是过去时态，你都没有注意，太多动词了，我就不一一改了。

Answer 2

My Summer Holiday
Our summer holidays are from the July 1 to the August 31 yearly. It’s quite a long time, and I can do many things during this time. It is really muggy in the summer holiday. We
must wear T-shirt and shorts. Last month, I graduated from the elementary
school. So I don’t have to do any summer homework. It makes me feel very happy and excited. But I entered for an English class. In this English class, I have made some new friends. We get along well with one another.They are all friendly. In my spare time, I always listen to music such as pop,jazz and classical. Sometimes I ride my bicycle outside. I believe that doing more sports would made me stronger.By the way, My new bicycle is very fantastic.Time passes so quickly that summer has passed half. I have the opportunity to travel. I am going to visit the Yellow Mountain tomorrow. I am looking forward to enjoying the beauty of the Yellow Mountain.It must be wonderful.

我也只读高中，改得不好请谅解！

Answer 3

My Summer Holiday Everyyear, Our 第二排的holiday后应该是句号，接下来的we大写 太多动词了，我就不一一改了。 My Summer