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哪位高手帮我把这段翻译成英文~~ 翻译软件勿进！！！

哪位高手帮我把这段翻译成英文~~ 谢谢谢谢~~~~ 翻译软件勿进！！！

大家好~ 我很高兴能在这里向大家介绍我自己。
我是一个活泼外向的女生~~ 和大多数人一样~ 我也是爱交朋友的，朋友对我来说也是很重要的。
但是我有一些缺点，我的性格太直率要强，以至于有时候会得罪人。
但这不是我的本意，所以我会努力改正的！！

在空闲的时间，我喜欢听歌，上网，或者和朋友聊天逛街。
我讨厌寂寞的感觉。那让我很沮丧。
相信很多人跟我一样吧？
这就是我。谢谢~~

帮我翻一下哈~~~ 谢谢谢谢呢~~~

Answer 1

Hello,everyone.I'm glad that I can introduce myself to you here.
I'm an out-going girl and like many people,I like making friends with others,because friends are quite important for me.
I think I can get on well with most people,though sometimes I may upset someone because of my candor.I feel sorry for it and make up my mind to cure the defect.
I am fond of listening to music,suffering on the Internet and going out with my friends when having free time.I hate the feeling of lonely which may make me dispirited, and I think many people share the same feeling with me,don't they?
Thank you!

略有改动.加了一句"我相信我能和大部分人相处融洽",少了一句"这就是我"

Answer 2

Good ~ I am very pleased to be here to introduce myself.
I was a lively and outgoing girls ~ ~ ~ Like most people, and I also love to make friends, friends have told me, is very important.
But I have some shortcomings, I too outspoken character stronger, sometimes even offend people.
But it is not my intention, so I will work hard to correct it! !

In free time, I like the personal stereo, Internet, or chat with friends and shopping.
I hate feeling lonely. That I am frustrated.
I believe many people like me?
This is me. Thank you ~ ~
累死我了!!!!!!~~~~~晕~~~~~~
!!!!!~~~~~~~~~