Question

各位大神~~帮我修改修改这篇英语作文吧。。。。

A few days ago I saw LYCE video.Liyang consider that English should be read out and do the loudest, fastest, most accurate, and I very much agree with his ideas, So this afternoon I started with Li Yang teacher teaching methods to recite the text.I recite the text tells about friendship, this text I was incredibly moved, so I know to cherish the friendship is extremely useful.In the article, a taxi driver is reading the letter. He must have been utterly lost in something he was reading because the author of this article had to tap on the windshield to get his attention.This letter is the taxi driver wrote to his old friends, but not yet sent to his old friend died.Lost something cannot come back, so treasure all of our eyes.

Answer 1

改过了，不过是按照自己的语感 ，后面没改，看不下去了
A few days ago ，I saw LYCE video.Liyang considerS that English should be read out and do the loudest, fastest, most accurate, and I agree with his ideas very much, So this afternoon I started with Li Yang teacher teaching methods to recite the text.The text I recited tells about friendship, I was incredibly moved by this text, so I know that cherishing the friendship is extremely useful.In the article, a taxi driver is reading the letter. He must have been utterly lost in something he was reading because the author of this article had to tap on the windshield to get his attention.This letter is the taxi driver wrote to his old friends, but not yet sent to his old friend died.Lost something cannot come back, so treasure all of our eyes.

Answer 2

A few days ago， I saw the video of Liyang Crazy English.Liyang considers that English should be read out and we should speak English louder, faster, and more accurate. I agreed with his ideas very much. So this afternoon I started to recite the text with Li Yang's teaching methods . I recited a text about friendship. This text was incredibly moving, so I learnt that cherishing the friendship is extremely important.In the article, a taxi driver is reading a letter. He must have been utterly lost in something he is reading, because the author of this article have to tap on the windshield to get his attention.This letter is given to the driver's old friend, but his friend has been dead, so cannot get the letter. Something lost cannot come back again, so treasure all of our friends.