Question

高一英语短文改错

Yesterday ,our teacher told to us something about the Hope Project in class.It has been set up to help the children in the countryside can't afford to go to school.After school,i was on the way home wondering if i could do angthing for project while i caught sight of the money-collecting box on the table .Then i made up my mind to sending my pocket money which i saved for nearly one year to those poor children.I wrote a letter for them and hurried to the post office .Together with a letter ,I posted the money and sent my best wish to them .And then I turned to go home pleasant.  This afternoon we had a P.E lesson.Our teacher taught us to practicing the long jump.When the bell rang,we gather in the playground.After warming-up exercise ,the teacher told us the way of long jump and showed us what to do it.Then we followed the teacher ang practiced one after other.Soon came my turn,but I felt a bit nervously.Though I failed the first time,I didn't lose my heart.I kept on practicing while some other students were relaxed.At last I was able to jump over 3 meter with the teacher or classmates' help.From this lesson I came to see where there is will there is a way. 两偏各有10处错误.请各位高手帮帮忙,谢谢.

Answer 1

同学，你好，改错要自己多改改才能提高的，我把他的中文翻译给你吧，你看看翻译哪里错了，那么原文就哪里错了。

昨天,我们的老师告诉我们一些关于希望工程在类。它已经成立来帮助农村孩子不能去上学。放学后,我在回家的路上想,如果我能做点什么项目而我看见money-collecting的盒子放在桌子上。然后我决定派我的零花钱,我救了近一年对那些可怜的孩子。我给他们写了一封信,跑到邮局。加上一个字母,我发布了金钱和发送祝福他们。然后我转身回家愉快。今天下午我们有体育课程。我们的老师教过我们练跳远。铃响了,我们聚集在操场上。热身练习后,老师告诉我们方法对跳远和显示我们怎么做它。然后我们跟着老师和全队在其他。很快就轮到我了,但是我感到有点紧张。尽管我失败了第一次,我没有失去我的心。我不停地练习,然而有些其他的学生都很放松。我终于能够跳过3米和老师或同学的帮助。从这节课我来看看哪里有将有一个办法。

还望采纳，谢谢。

Answer 2

Yesterday ,our teacher told (to)删除 us something about the Hope Project in class.It has been set up to help the children in the countryside（who)添加 can't afford to go to school.After school,i was on the way home wondering if i could do angthing for project （while改成when） i caught sight of the money-collecting box on the table .Then i made up my mind to sending 去掉ing) my pocket money which i saved for nearly one year to those poor children.I wrote a letter for)换成to) them and hurried to the post office .Together with a letter ,I posted the money and sent my best wish(加es) to them .And then I turned to go home pleasant)加ly). This afternoon we had a P.E lesson.Our teacher taught us to practicing去掉ing) the long jump.When the bell rang,we gather in the playground.After warming-up exercise ,the teacher told us the way of long jump and showed us what(how) to do it.Then we followed the teacher and practiced one after other.Soon came my turn,but I felt a bit nervously去掉ly）.Though I failed the first time,I didn't lose my heart.I kept on practicing while some other students were relaxed.At last I was able to jump over 3 meter with the teacher or classmates' help.From this lesson I came to see （that) where there is will there is a way.

Answer 3

Yesterday ,our teacher told us something about the Hope Project in class.It was set up to help the children in the countryside who couldn't afford to go to school.After school,i was on the way to home wondered if i could do something for project while i caught sight of the money-collecting box on the table .Then i made up my mind to send my pocket money which i saved for nearly one year to those poor children.I wrote a letter to them and hurried to the post office .Together with the letter ,I posted the money and sent my best wishes to them .And then I turned to go home pleasant. This afternoon we had a P.E lesson.Our teacher taught us to practice the long jump.When the bell rang,we gathered in the playground.After warming-up exercise ,the teacher told us the way of long jump and showed us how to do it.Then we followed the teacher and practiced one after aother.Soon came my turn,but I felt a little nervous.Though I failed the first time,I didn't lose my heart.I kept on practicing while some other students were relaxed.At last I was able to jump over 3 meter with the teacher and classmates' help.From this lesson I came to see where there is will there is a way.

Answer 4

Not all people like to work but everyone likes to play .All over the world men and women, boys and girls enjoy sports. Since long time ago,