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高一暑假英语作文 P.S要使用如at first,then,after that,finally,later,immediately,one day等等

要有100字以上

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This summer holiday is the most impressive one that I have ever spent! I was very happy in this holiday because so many exciting and meaningful events happent. At first,as we all know, the London Olympic Games! The openning ceremony impressed me but I think It is not so perfect as that in the Beijing Olympic Games. My father and I have been keeping a watch on the games. I am so proud of our country! Our excellent chinese players won the plause of the world, especially the talent swimmer-- YEI SHI WEN. She is in the same age as I am ,but as a teenager,she represent our national spirits-- modest,hardworking,honest,smart and confident. She set a good example for chinese teenagers! After the first gold medal, she won a second immediately facing the westerns' critics and doubts! What a heroin!

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