Question

请英语高手帮忙： 书面表达 根据中文提示写一篇80词左右的短文。上星期本人乘火车去杭州旅行。 请看下面

杭州是我国最美丽的城市之一，以西湖著名，有许多名胜古迹。游园，泛舟，爬山，美好时光，终生难忘。
千万不要用网络翻译！！！！

Answer 1

蒽、作文如下：

Hangzhou is one of the most beautiful cities in China。The most famous is west lake, of course, it has many other places of historic interest，too。
Last week, I took train to visit Hangzhou， where I climbed in the "gem mountain" ，and saw the sunrise。 It is really beautiful that the sun rised at that moment， Later I went to the west lake rowed a boat, and then ，I saunter on the way for two hours of park。 Finally， I felt a little tired, but I was very happy, and this is a good memory, life is unforgettable。

同学，你好，我当初也是对英语很郁闷的，但我后来一直在努力学，所以才在高考时得了94分。你要相信自己，作文只要你多读，多写，多积累，就会有回报的。所以，你不要怕写作文，总有一天你会让作文怕你的。