Question

英语作文，我要请教。(初三的)

书面表达。 假如你是李平，一位中学生志愿者，请你根据所给提示词用英语写一篇短文，介绍你上周末去一家孤儿院参加志愿者活动的经历。 a quick breakfast ,go to ...with get , 8:30 give presents ,sing and dance ,tell story,play games the children ,feel happy go home,15:30 feeling 要求： 所给提示词在文章中要全部用上，其中第六条是写你对本次活动的感想和体会，请充分发挥你的想像力； 根据需要，使用正确的语态； 内容充实，意思连贯，语言通顺，书写规范。 词数70左右，不包括已给出的句子。 my busy sunday I am li ping,a volunteer.last sunday morning ---------------------------------因为我的英语基础差，所以麻烦下大家。请大家不要敷衍我，认真点对待，谢谢。

Answer 1

首先，根据所给提示a quick breakfast 知道李平是匆忙结束早餐的，再看go to...with 可知他和谁去哪参加志愿活动，get ，8:30 提示你是8:30到的，give presents 可知他是带礼物去的，他赠送给孤儿们礼物，sing and dance 可知他陪孤儿们唱歌跳舞，tell story ，play games 可知他给孤儿们讲故事，陪他们玩游戏，the children, feel happy 可知孤儿们感到非常开心，go home,15:30告诉你他15:30 回家的，至于最后的feeling一词，你可以灵活运用，可以这样写：he had a good feeling in this volunteer activity 整体思路很清晰，不知楼主是否明白。

Answer 2

英语写作描述一个事情先弄清楚以下几点：
who（谁）：Li Ping, a volunteer.

what（什么）：Volunteering for an orphanage,

when（时间）：Last Sunday morning, 8:30 arrive at orphonage, 15:30 go home

where（地点）：orphonage
how（方式）：had breakfast, give presents, sing and dance, tell stories, play games, very busy

why（为什么）：Li ping feels happy for doing good deeds.

然后在给大概每一个写一句话，这样你就有六句话了。

示范

I am Li Ping, a volunteer, and this is the story of my busy sunday. Last Sunday morning, I went to volunteer for an orphonage. I woke up really early to have breakfast and arrived at the orphonage at 8:30a.m.. I gave gave presents to them and told them stories. Together, we sang, danced and played games. I was very busy the whole day and I went home at 15:30. I felt very happy to be able to help out those poor children and I feel really blessed to not be one of them.

希望有帮助

Answer 3

自己解决》。。不然你永远都要依赖，英语会一直不得提高。自己写才会发现自己的问题

Answer 4

I had a quick breakfast and went to the orphanage with some other volunteers. We got there at 8:30. We gave nice presents to the children. We sang and danced for them. Also, we told funny stories and played games with them. The children felt very happy. At 15:30, we said goodbye to the children and went home. I think it was a meaningful day for me. I would like to take part in such an activity. As a volunteer, I feel very proud of myself because I can bring pleasure to people.