Question

一小段英语翻译 不要什么修饰 要通顺的直译 O(∩_∩)O谢谢 抱歉 有点多

Have you heard about “Survival Holidays”? “Survival Holidays” is for children to go into the lonely place for exciting activities. Now about 1,100 companies are allowed to take children into the great outdoors without their parents.
The reason why people like “Survival Holidays” is that they think being close to nature is good for children. Many children in big cities spend all time watching TV and playing computer games. “Survival Holidays” gives them an important change.
Is “Survival Holidays” a wonderful idea? Maybe it is. Children need more free time to play. They need to be left on their own, without adults disturbing them. Parents care too much about their children. They like to see the children being busy with activities that are controlled by adults, which causes many problems. Children don’t know what to do when they are in danger. Even something like crossing a small river seems to be a hard challenge. Children are not comfortable with danger. Even slight danger like getting their feet wet or falling down seems very terrible to them.
Many people think the survival activities are good for children. Even years later, they will still remember what they have learned. Some have learned to stay calm in different times. Some have learned how to keep safe. Others have learned how to work in a team. All these skills will help them a lot in their lives.

Answer 1

你听说过生存假期吗？生存假期是给孩子们到荒凉的野外进行令人兴奋的活动的。现在大约1100所机构被允许将没有父母陪同的孩子带到美妙的大自然里。
人们喜欢的生存假期的原因是他们认为亲近自然对孩子们有益。许多大城市中的孩子花所有时间在看电视和打电脑游戏上。生存假期给他们带来重大的改变。
生存假期是个好主意吗？也许是的。孩子们需要更多的空余时间来玩。他们需要被单独留下，没有大人打扰。父母太过于照顾他们的孩子，这导致了许多问题。孩子们不知道在处于危险境地时应该做什么。甚至是连蹚过一条小河似乎也是一个艰难的挑战。孩子们在遇到危险时紧张不安。甚至是像弄湿脚或者摔倒这样的危险对他们来说也似乎十分可怕。
许多人认为生存活动是对孩子们有益的。哪怕很多年以后，他们也会记得他们学过什么。一些人学会在不同的时候都保持镇静，一些人学会如何保证自己的安全。其他人学会了怎样进行团队合作。这些技能都将在他们以后的人生中帮助他们很多。

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咳，翻的不怎么样，凑合看看吧……

Answer 2

你是否听说过“生存假期”，生存假期是指让孩子们独自去某个地方进行活动。现在有将近1100家被允许在无父母陪同的情况下带着孩子们去野外进行活动。
人们之所以喜欢生存假期的原因是他们认为让孩子去贴近自然对他们是有好处的。许多生活在大城市里的孩子终日与电视机和电动游戏为伴。生存假期为他们提供了一个改变的机会
那么，生存假期是不是个好电子呢？或许他它就是，孩子们需要更多是的时间去玩。他们需要靠自己的能力，而不是大人围着团团转。父母们都为自己的儿女们考虑的太多了，他们希望自己的孩子在自己的看管之下活动，但这样却引发了很多的问题。比如，孩子们在危险时刻不知道该怎么做，即使渡过一条小河都会变得无比艰难。孩子们在不安全的环境下显得难受。即使小小的“危险”诸如弄湿了鞋、摔了一跤也会让他们觉得得无比糟糕。
许多人都觉得生存假期对孩子们是有益的、即使多年以后，他们仍然记得她们所收获的东西。有些孩子学到了如何在困难时期保持冷静，有些则学到了如何保护自己，还有另一些则学会了如何团队作战。所有的这些学到的东西都将对他们以后的日子里受益匪浅。

-----------译者的话，确实吓了一跳。看着内容你应该还是学生吧，呵呵 ，是阅读理解题吧
翻译给你了哈，可是百分百纯手工的哦

追问

您翻译的挺好 就是我要的是直译 您加了一些修饰 有一些细节有点不准确 所以不能给您满意了 麻烦您了 希望您能继续多多帮助别人 O(∩_∩)O谢谢

追答

呵呵 不会