Question

请问这句英语对吗？如果有错需要怎么修改？谢谢！

Cyberspace needs to improve its security.

Answer 1

不对。
句子主语和谓语动词不搭配，导致出现浓厚的 Chinglish 味道。

追答

建议改成
We need to improve cyberspace security.

追问

如果非要cyberspace做主语呢？

追答

Cyberspace needs improvement in security.