My summer vacation 帮我写一篇英语作文，我是小学，就是积极向上一点
最后希望可以写即将到来的初中生活，自己要努力，最好是过去式，然后就是写自己去哪些景点玩了。60-80字，不要有语法错误，重点地方希望你用中文注释一下，到时候奖赏分大大的有...
最后希望可以写即将到来的初中生活，自己要努力，最好是过去式，然后就是写自己去哪些景点玩了。60-80字，不要有语法错误，重点地方希望你用中文注释一下，到时候奖赏分大大的有！
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My Summer Vacation
Time flies. My happy primary school life has just ended. I visited Beijing, a well-known modern city with a long history. We all know that The Emperor(皇帝) of China lived in the Forbidden City(紫禁城）many years ago. In consequence(因此）,as soon as I had stepped（过去完成时表示这个动作先发生） into the City, I immediately（马上）felt a strong atmosphere of luxury（奢华的气氛）. The guide led us to visit every palace(宫殿）in the City and I was shocked（被震惊）by the fantastic view in front of my eyes. I have a very happy summer vacation.
As for（至于) my coming（即将到来的) middle school life, I always say to myself that I have to study hard. As the old saying goes well, 'Attitude is everything.' (正如一句名言所说，态度决定一切)
这是我纯原创的哦。。也许有些地方还欠妥。希望对你有所帮助。
Time flies. My happy primary school life has just ended. I visited Beijing, a well-known modern city with a long history. We all know that The Emperor(皇帝) of China lived in the Forbidden City(紫禁城）many years ago. In consequence(因此）,as soon as I had stepped（过去完成时表示这个动作先发生） into the City, I immediately（马上）felt a strong atmosphere of luxury（奢华的气氛）. The guide led us to visit every palace(宫殿）in the City and I was shocked（被震惊）by the fantastic view in front of my eyes. I have a very happy summer vacation.
As for（至于) my coming（即将到来的) middle school life, I always say to myself that I have to study hard. As the old saying goes well, 'Attitude is everything.' (正如一句名言所说，态度决定一切)
这是我纯原创的哦。。也许有些地方还欠妥。希望对你有所帮助。
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虽然很不错，但是我真的住在北京，去过不止一趟故宫，但是谢谢你
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作业还是要自己写 不过下面的那篇例文 我觉得应该参考 照搬是不行的
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