Question

我写的一篇英语作文帮麻烦修改下，谢谢

看下哪些句子有语法错误，哪些句子写的不好，写的部好麻烦帮我改下.
我英语成绩非常烂，麻烦修改详细点啊
千万不要像语法书上那样讲我看不懂
My school
My school was very terrible. turning on the light is not allowed in the daytime.Some students wan to turn on the light.because the eyes of them was not good and （看不清黑板）.（如果我们把打开了 被学校发现就会罚款）
The WC of school was very very terrible.No water and nobody clean.Eery time I went there want to vomit.
Many teachers of school was not duty to us.So many students’ grades was very terrible amd they always got a D this term.
我英语老师部管我们，我好跑到这里来了.这是我今天上课发牢骚写的.内容是真实的哦
括号里面的句子是我不会写的

Answer 1

我不知道你的语法怎么用的，看着我都无语。
中间的那个，你找百度上翻译器，能翻译到、
你的时态用过去时的话，也没关系

追问

老师没有教过我们语法

追答

你可以说的离谱一点么
我对你已经很佩服了

追问

你不信算了，我们老师说考试部不语法，不学也没有关系

追答

什么狗屁老师
我中考考试全是考语法和经典句型

Answer 2

they can not see the blackboard.If we turn the light on ,we will be found to be fine

Answer 3

看不清黑板 Can not see the blackboard clearly
如果我们把打开了 If we turn on the lights,we will be fined

追问

我要修改作文啊