谁能帮我润色一下英语作文
谁能帮我润色一下英语作文
Is it necessary to help someone who is in danger?This question often cause heated discussion.Recently,more people tend to be indifferent to people who are in need.
For example,when an old man fall down to the road , no one dare to show their kindness.how shameful this behavior is!Such news always make me feel sad.It's a pity that it might result in the absence of morality.
As I see,just as the proverb goes,the rose is in her hand,the flavor in mine.It should be put highest priority for us to help others.It is widely recognized that sometimes we would be exorted by those who behave wounded deliberately.What's more,what has resulted in the phenomenon is the loss of awareness of the moral values.
.As we all know,there is no denying of the fact that anybody wouldn't need others' help once in a while.Appealing to the public to help others is both significant and essential.Not only the citizens but also the government are supposed to take measures to minimize the loss of social morality so that there are more warm-hearted people and fewer cold-heart citizens.We might as well to be careful and ensure if they need help before we help others.Meanwhile,the society plays an important role in mutual assistance.
The more attention we pay to others,the more happiness we can generate .
只能这样了，这样显得文章更加完整一些，还是尽量不要百度一些句子，因为一些用法不是很对，用自己熟悉的或者是书上的
谁帮我润色一下我的一篇英语作文
你读 ？ 看看 我是不是可以 、、
考研英语作文 谁能帮我修改润色下
第一段used to be beautiful,后面用完成时更好，has already been full of……
第二段感觉很乱
第三段it is high time(that) we should enhanced people's……你的用法感觉错了，首尾两段写的不错！
英语大神帮我润色一下这篇作文~
I genuinely want to express my thanks to my parents. They educate me about how to learn, how to live, and how to love. I wouldn't be so happy if they are not here.
During my childhood, my father surprisingly found that I have talent and passion in painting. He then discussed with my mother, and reached a consensus to send me to painting major, where I am lucky to develop my interest. Also, in the senior high school time, my parents didn't urge me to study for a good score, but to pursue my own interest, which leads me to my current road. They acknowledged me that love is the most important element in learning something.
I hope my parents can receive my love through this letter.
谁能帮我把这句英文润色一下？
Birth control is of great importance and is definitely inevitale to the country's conomic development.
谁能帮我润色一下这段话
呵呵，我改了一些不太准确的词，加了几个连词显得通顺一些，删掉了多余的东西。不知道怎么样。请多多指教^_^
In the recent decades ,China has experienced an ever increasing economic boom. With the development of the economy，many panies have to change their ways of management and strategies to meet their needs for Information and Communication Technology.As a result, information industry in China has undergone fast development. As an old saying “technology is the source of productivity”, technology plays a central role in modern society.However, Distributed Systems in China is still at its preliminary period at present,and shortage of professionals who are expert in Distributed Systems is one of the most pelling problems. The vacancy in this field drives me to pursue further study in Distributed Systems.
谁能帮我改一下英语作文
I HAVE always been keen on listening to Classic Music. My favourite singer is Adrea Bocelli WHO is an italian blind singer. His special kind of tenor voice HAS always been a infatuation to me.
Bocelli was born in Lajatico, Italy in 1958. At the age of six, he started to play MUSIC INSTRUMENTS such as piano, flute ,saxophone, trumpet and guitar.When he was 12, he pletely lost his sight after an aiedent of a soer game. Yet it didint discourage him a bit, because of the inspiring words that CAME out of his father's mouth"Hey little boy, dont be sad! This world belongs to everyone, instead of not seeing the world in front of you, what you can do is, let this world shine on you!"
He went on to study and graduated from the University of Pisa. In 1994, his first album came out called“Il calmo della sera", which MEANS the peace evening sea in English, ENTERING the Italian Top Ten. My favourite SONGS from that album are "Il mare calmo della sera" and "sogno".
He is great! Every time I listen to his voice, it just gives me a sense of peacefullness. I can feel the joy and happiness throughout the song. His attitude toward life is what I like best --- optimistic. I'm sure that his SONGS will stay with me for my entire life.
英语作文，谁能帮我修改一下？
谁能帮我修改一下英语作文?
看不见，不是我眼睛出事了吧。
If you have a friend who gives his hand to you ...
In my life...意为‘在我的生命里’， 比during my life 好，因为你的一生好长着呢。
...firendship is the most valuable wealth and unfading memory that I own.
when I was 10 ...I didn't get any ...(时态有问题，改称过去时比较好)
...standing behind me.
We don;t study in the same...
最后一句不知所云。
