Question

帮忙翻译一小段话，一定不要机器翻译，好的话再追加。谢谢！！

越地道和简洁越好。也不一定每个点都包含，但意思越准确越好。谢谢！就是下面这一段：

“随着交谈，我和她慢慢熟悉起来，她也不像最初的时候那样拘谨，并开始向我讲述她的家庭。她的爸爸妈妈在她很小时就离了婚，母亲组建了新的家庭，而她则随着爸爸生活。五岁那年，父亲为了挣钱去了遥远的城市，一年、有时甚至两、三年才能回家一次，一次只能呆10天左右，每当临近父亲出发的日子，心里总是充满了不舍。这十年间，她主要和奶奶住在一起。白天她要走很远的山路去学校，放学回家后还要帮奶奶干农活。这和我在北京幸福的生活真是太不一样了！
还是不够地道和简洁啊……感觉比较Chinglish……希望大家帮帮忙！！

Answer 1

As the talk continued,I got more and more familiar with her. She gradually let off her shyness and started to tell me about her family. Her parents divorced while she was very young- Her mother started a new family with others yet she lived with her father. When she was five years old,her father left home for a far-away city to make money, and returned home every one or even sometimes two to three years for a ten-day or so stay at home. Whenever her father was to leave, she was very reluctant to let him go. During the past ten years, she mainly lived with her grandma. In the daytime, she had to go a long way in the mountains to go to school and after school she must help her grandma with the farmwork, Her life and mine in Beijing are totally different.

Answer 2

"As the conversation, she and I slowly become familiar, she is also not the first time as stiff, and began telling me about her family, her father and mother divorced her very mother formed a newfamily, and she, along with the father of life was five years old, his father to earn money to a distant city, year, and sometimes even two or three years before returning home, one can only stay 10 days or so, whenever approachingfather starting the day, my heart is always filled with dismay. these ten years, she and her grandmother to live with her during the day to go very far mountain to go to school, but also to help my grandmother came home from school to do farm work andhappy life in Beijing is really not the same!

Answer 3

Conversation being continued, we gradually become familiar with each other and her formality wears off.Then she begins to tell me about her family. When she was little, her parents broke the marriage and her mother remarried, which left her living with her father. When she was five years old,her father left for a faraway city to make money and returned home once a year,sometimes even every two or three years, with a stay of ten days or so. She was always reluctant to be separated during those days when her father was to set off. In fact,she mainly lived with her grandmother in the past ten years.In the daytime,she went to school through a long mountain road,and helped her grandmother do some field work after school, which is so different from my happy life in Beijing.

Answer 4

As we talk, she and I gradually become closer. She's not as uptight as she used to be, and she starts telling me about her family. Her parents were divorced when she was very young. Her mother had a new family. She in turn lived with her father. When she was five, her father went to another city to earn a living. He only came home once a year, sometimes once in two to three years. Each time he only stayed for about ten days. When it was time for her father to leave, she was reluctant to see him go. For the past ten years, she lives with her grandmother. During the day, she has to walk a long way to get to school. When she gets home, she has to help her grandmother with farm work. This is too different from the life I lead in Beijing!

Answer 5

we're getting more familiar as continued talked , she's not reserved like beginning and started to talk something about her family . Her parents divorced when she was a child , and her mother married someone else ,while she lived with her father .When she was five years old ,her father left to a far-away city to make money , and seldom came back , sometimes one year ,some times two or three years , and only stayed about 10 days every time he back ,she was very reluctant to let him go when he was to leave . During the past ten years , she mainly lived with her grandma . Everyday , she had to go a long mountain road to school and after school she need to help her grandma for the farmwork , Well , all her sufferings are so different with the happy life I have in Beijing .
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