高悬分。麻烦看一下这段英文的语法有无错误,谢谢了。也希望帮忙组织一下成为更好更完整的句子,谢谢了。
IneverregretthatIchoseyou.Pleasedon'thateme.AlthoughIlikeatomboyandugly,andtoofat,but...
I never regret that I chose you.Please don't hate me.Although I like a tomboy and ugly,and too fat,but I hope you do not hate me.You will always be special.As long as you don't hate me,I will meet.
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(1)Although I [加 look] like a tomboy and [加 am] ugly and too fat, [去掉 but] I hope...
(2) 最后那个 meet 我没看懂,你是说 你要跟他相约吗?加上 I will meet (you) 比较好点。
总体来讲这句英文没什么太大的错误,主要是句型不丰富,读起来有点死板。
另外一点,不要太强调那个 do not hate me 说一次就够了,不用强调三次。
更完整的句子 :
I never regret that I chose you. Although I look like a tomboy and am ugly as well as fat, I hope that you won't hate me. You will always be special, and I will meet (with you) if you like me the way I am.
这里我就把第一个 hate me 去掉了,第二个保留着,第三个转换成 if you like me the way I am.
我觉得这样读起来通顺了好多,突出了你对他/她 的感情,但同时也像他/她泄漏了你自己的弱点。
~ ♥ 自己认真整理的,现在应该比较地道了,敬请采纳、 有建议请追问。
(2) 最后那个 meet 我没看懂,你是说 你要跟他相约吗?加上 I will meet (you) 比较好点。
总体来讲这句英文没什么太大的错误,主要是句型不丰富,读起来有点死板。
另外一点,不要太强调那个 do not hate me 说一次就够了,不用强调三次。
更完整的句子 :
I never regret that I chose you. Although I look like a tomboy and am ugly as well as fat, I hope that you won't hate me. You will always be special, and I will meet (with you) if you like me the way I am.
这里我就把第一个 hate me 去掉了,第二个保留着,第三个转换成 if you like me the way I am.
我觉得这样读起来通顺了好多,突出了你对他/她 的感情,但同时也像他/她泄漏了你自己的弱点。
~ ♥ 自己认真整理的,现在应该比较地道了,敬请采纳、 有建议请追问。
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I never regret that I chose you.Please don't hate me.Although I (加 am) like a tomboy (去掉and 换上一个豆号,) ugly(去掉豆号,)and too fat,(去掉but) I hope you do not hate me.You will always be special.As long as you don't hate me,(I will meet.这里不含接,没有意思)
要注意的是 : Although 是 : 虽然.....但是 的意思,所以切忌不再要加上 "but" 只用一个豆号即可。
要注意的是 : Although 是 : 虽然.....但是 的意思,所以切忌不再要加上 "but" 只用一个豆号即可。
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I have never regretted that I have chosen you.Please don't hate me.Although I look like a tombbody and I am ugly and fat,I hope you do not hate me.You will be special forever.As long as you don't hate me,I will be content.
希望对你有所帮助,祝你快乐!
I have never regretted that I have chosen you.Please don't hate me.Although I look like a tombbody and I am ugly and fat,I hope you do not hate me.You will be special forever.As long as you don't hate me,I will be content.
希望对你有所帮助,祝你快乐!
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