Question

我的朋友英语作文

1.50单词左右（要有汉语意思0

Answer 1

my best friend
Friends are very important to everyone. With friends, we can share a lot of things together. Let me tell you my friend. My friend is my cousin Lily. That’s her English name, lily. We are at the same age. But she knows much more than me. She helps me with my English. And
She is also the person who teaches me to make salad. I like this friend pretty much. Next week she will have her birthday party. I will make a great fruit salad myself as a gift for her. I hope she’ll be happy to have it. Of course, there will be another present for her. But what is it? I won’t tell you. I want to keep it as a secret. If you want to know, let’s go to her party together. And you’ll know it yourself. Aha
对每个人来说朋友都是非常重要的。和朋友们在一起，我们可以分享很多事情。让我告诉你我的朋友吧。我的朋友是我的表姐lily。Lily是她的英文名字。我们俩个同龄。但是她知道的东西可比我多多了。她帮助我学习英语。她也是教会我做沙拉的人。我非常喜欢这个朋友。下个星期她会开生日派对。我会亲自为她做一个很棒的水果沙拉。我希望她见到这个礼物的时候很高兴。当然，我还为她准备了另外一个礼物。但是它是什么呢？我不会告诉你的。我想把它暂时保持神秘。如果你想知道的话，我们一起去她的派对吧。到时候，你自己就知道啦。哈哈

Answer 2

My best friend

Friends are very important to everyone. With friends, we can share a lot of things together. Let me tell you my friend. My friend is my cousin Lily (严格来说，既然是表妹、堂妹， 就不可以算是朋友了！不可不知). That’s her English name,Lily （用大写，是专有名词）. We are at（of） the same age. But she knows much more than I . She helps me with my English （lessons）. And she is also the person who teaches me to make salad. I like this friend pretty much. Next week she will have her birthday party. I will make a great fruit salad myself as a gift for her. I hope she’ll be happy to have it. Of course, there will be another present for her. But what is it? I won’t tell you. I want to keep it as a secret. If you want to know, let’s go to her party together. And you’ll know it yourself then. Aha

写得相当流利， 注意一些瑕疵，文法， 加油！很好