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短文改错 When I was a child, my mom was pushed me to study hard, hoping I could

When I was a child, my mom was pushed me to study hard, hoping I could get a chance to go to college. I experience pressure for the first time. I did that my mom expected because I didn’t want to let her off. I was born to a poor peasant family, but I really knew life was not easy. All the things my mother did was the result of her hope that I could lead better life in the future. As the saying go, “No pains, no gains.” I was finally able to meet my mother expectations and have a chance to go to college. Thanks to my mother’s push and the pressure, I made it. Now, I no longer think pressure is a good thing.

Answer 1

When I was a child, my mom was （此处was去掉）pushed me to study hard, hoping I could get a chance to go to college. I experience(此处应用过去式+d) pressure for the first time. I did that (what)my mom expected because I didn’t want to let her off(down;let sb. down让某人失落). I was born to（in） a poor peasant family, but （改为so，此处的逻辑关系应该为顺承而非转折）I really knew life was not easy. All the things my mother did was(were此处应该为复数) the result of her hope that I could lead （加a）better life in the future. As the saying go(goes), “No pains, no gains.” I was finally able to meet my mother（mother's） expectations and have a chance to go to college. Thanks to my mother’s push and the pressure, I made it. Now, I no longer think pressure is a good(此处是bad) thing.

Answer 2

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When I was a child, my mom (去掉was) pushed me to study hard, hoping I could get a chance to go to college. I (experience改成experienced) pressure for the first time. I did (that改成what) my mom expected because I didn’t want to let her (off改成down). I was born to a poor peasant family, (but改成so) I really knew life was not easy. All the things my mother did (was改成were) the result of her hope that I could lead (加入a) better life in the future. As the saying (go改成goes), “No pains, no gains.” I was finally able to meet my mother expectations and (have改成had) a chance to go to college. Thanks to my mother’s push and the pressure, I made it. Now, I no longer think pressure is a (good改成bad) thing.

Answer 3

was pushed（pushed） experience(experienced) that (what) ler off(let down) but （and）As the saying go（goes）have a chance （had）a good thing（bad）