短文改错 When I was a child, my mom was pushed me to study hard, hoping I could

WhenIwasachild,mymomwaspushedmetostudyhard,hopingIcouldgetachancetogotocollege.Iexper... When I was a child, my mom was pushed me to study hard, hoping I could get a chance to go to college. I experience pressure for the first time. I did that my mom expected because I didn’t want to let her off. I was born to a poor peasant family, but I really knew life was not easy. All the things my mother did was the result of her hope that I could lead better life in the future. As the saying go, “No pains, no gains.” I was finally able to meet my mother expectations and have a chance to go to college. Thanks to my mother’s push and the pressure, I made it. Now, I no longer think pressure is a good thing. 展开
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When I was a child, my mom was (此处was去掉)pushed me to study hard, hoping I could get a chance to go to college. I experience(此处应用过去式+d) pressure for the first time. I did that (what)my mom expected because I didn’t want to let her off(down;let sb. down让某人失落). I was born to(in) a poor peasant family, but (改为so,此处的逻辑关系应该为顺承而非转折)I really knew life was not easy. All the things my mother did was(were此处应该为复数) the result of her hope that I could lead (加a)better life in the future. As the saying go(goes), “No pains, no gains.” I was finally able to meet my mother(mother's) expectations and have a chance to go to college. Thanks to my mother’s push and the pressure, I made it. Now, I no longer think pressure is a good(此处是bad) thing.
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When I was a child, my mom (去掉was) pushed me to study hard, hoping I could get a chance to go to college. I (experience改成experienced) pressure for the first time. I did (that改成what) my mom expected because I didn’t want to let her (off改成down). I was born to a poor peasant family, (but改成so) I really knew life was not easy. All the things my mother did (was改成were) the result of her hope that I could lead (加入a) better life in the future. As the saying (go改成goes), “No pains, no gains.” I was finally able to meet my mother expectations and (have改成had) a chance to go to college. Thanks to my mother’s push and the pressure, I made it. Now, I no longer think pressure is a (good改成bad) thing.
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was pushed(pushed) experience(experienced) that (what) ler off(let down) but (and)As the saying go(goes)have a chance (had)a good thing(bad)
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