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假如你是李华，你的笔友Jim最近沉溺于电脑游戏，为此你很担心。请根据下面的信息，给Jim写一封信，谈谈你的看法及建议。
Jim过去 功课好，积极参加学校的各项活动
Jim现在 对学习没有兴趣，上课不专心，不按时交作业
你的看法 也许玩电脑游戏能让你放松，但沉溺于其中会占用学习时间······
你的建议 （至少两点）
要求 1.词数：80左右，文章开头已写好，不计入总次数
2.要点完整，层次清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯
Dear Jim
I really feel worried about you.

Answer 1

Dear Jim：
I really feel worried about you.You study the past is so good, and actively participate in school activities. Teachers and students are like you. However, since you are addicted to computer games, you are not interested in learning, do not concentrate on class, don't hand in the homework on time. The teacher on how much you down! I think, maybe play computer games will make you relax, but indulging in them will take up valuable learning time, the vision will decline. As your good friend, I suggest you: appropriate to play computer games can relieve the pressure of learning, but you should control the time, not indulge in them. Believe that the bright that you'll understand!
Your good friend
亲爱的吉姆：
我真的很担心你。你过去学习很好，积极参加学校的活动。老师和同学们都很喜欢你。然而，自从你对电脑游戏上瘾，你对学习不感兴趣，上课不专心，不按时交作业。老师对你有多失望！我想，也许玩电脑游戏能使你放松，但沉溺于其中会占用宝贵的学习时间，视力也会下降。作为你的好朋友，我建议你，适当的玩电脑游戏可以减轻学习的压力，但是你应该控制时间，不能沉迷其中。相信聪明的你一定会明白！
你的好朋友

希望我的回答对你有帮助，谢谢~~

Answer 2

Dear JIm
I really feel worried about you,you used to be a good student,always be ready for all kinds of activities in your school,but take a look at you right now,you lose your interest in your school work and you even can't concentrate in your class,not to say turning in your homework on time.Is that all because of the computer games?I agree that computer games could make you feel relaxed and it is really entertaining but keep stucking in it will ruin you ! I suggest you to arrange your time properly and try to get rid of computer games.I hope you could understand computer games is nothing but fictitious,you should focus on your real life!

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